| Reviews for An Untold Beginning |
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  Lily Potter chapter 69 . 9/8 Coud u plzzz update? and also could u do an epilouge for this bok about mias weddign, and the others weddings, and about al their kids one final chapter? |
 TomRiddlesTwin chapter 69 . 9/5 Fantastic story! Absolutely marvellous |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/17 Geez you got me crying bad and I don't cry easily! Poor Mia, Lupen, and Sirius my heart breaks for all of them |
| Cassie L Malfoy chapter 1 . 8/17 Thx for the amazing updates! |
| Guest chapter 68 . 8/16 Ginny and harry what is going to happen with those two They made a very cute couple |
| Cassie L Malfoy chapter 66 . 8/12 Cassieopeia Lily Malfoy! Anyway could u plzzzzzzz update! Ik u r busy but this stry is amazing and i bookmark this tab and check everyday to see if u updated! I would lov eit if u had! |
| Cassie L Malfoy chapter 66 . 8/9 UPDATE! I WANN HEAR ABOUT DRACO MY GRANDADDY! BTW I AM A MALFOY LILY LUNA IS MY MUM AND SCORPIOUS IS MY DAD! |
| Guest chapter 66 . 8/5 The story is great. Update soon! |
| Guest chapter 66 . 7/31 Please write soon I am waiting next chapter. Good luck |
| Gemma chapter 66 . 7/26 PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story! |
| CS Darwin chapter 66 . 7/25 I’ve really enjoyed this story, I love the new additions to the original crew and the characters make them interesting to read, it’s a break from woodern planks for characters, the only thing I dislike about the characters are some lack of interaction (I.E, Harry’s lack of interaction with Mia when she caught Wormtail). I found the story’s rhythm to flow smoothly and it’s sub-plots,like Mia’s pack and there little ties to the story, made the story more amazing. I dislike the fact that your ending the Fic at below 500k words but your reasons are just. F.Y.I Gabe got an E on Potions as well as Harry so Gabe couldn’t have taken Potions at that current time (I am nit-picking, I apologise for that). Enjoyed this fanfic, I hope to enjoy your fantasy series as well. C.S. Darwin (P.S - If you finish writing/hit a writers block on your book, you could always come back and write a few chapters after or maybe tweak the story.) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23 Please I beg you ginny and harry are made for each other please and it was very important when they dated |
| Thehush1 chapter 26 . 7/23 It is 3 in the morning and I can't stop. I would fight the world for your Gabe, I am only part way through and I am fully hooked |
| Florfleur chapter 66 . 7/22 Thanks |
| PieterjanVDHD chapter 66 . 7/22 The near whole of 6th year in 1 chapter? I would have liked to see more of Slughorn in this fic. |
