will you update the story?

This is a great story and I so want you to finish there journey PLEASE thank you

Oh please will you finish there journey

Eeeeehhhhh! Omg this storie is so good! Please please please update soon!

Come on and update. You can't just leave it there. That's cruel. Lol

Ok its a little confusing. He went from meeting a stranger to waking up in bed with him and not freaking out? Was there a time gap you didnt state? It seems like you rushed in to the part they was in together and missed how. I like it though.

All of your stories are so captivating. I could read them all day.

love it

LOve Ya Story! Thats Esme Giving Him Te Blood! (I Think...) Keep Going.

-Piper 3

Glad Edward is safe. Jake is going to go ballistic when he finds out what Jane and Alec did.

I know this chapter wasn't filled with lemons or drama, but chapters like this are necessary every so often and I have to say that it built up the tension to the incident nicely.

thank you for writing.

oh come on now u r just been cruel. My god edward's a vampire. Will he be able 2 hear jake thoughs and found out about the imprint? Will he smell aweful 2 him? Will bella be a factor in this story man i cant wait 4 more of this. Update soon.

oh no! edward! why? well i hate that jane girl! i liked this chap! see you soon

sayo 0

OH MY GOD! U r soo mean that was the best chapter eva damn it was short and sweet it make begging 4 more how could u leave it it like that. PLZ UPDATE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS STORY.

wow - what a cliffie - more more

umm interesting, i want to know what they will do!, but i need to wait and be pacient, see you soon

sayo 0