This was absolutely amazing I couldn't handle it

...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *falls over and has a hyper-spasm*

So sweet. :) 333

Oooh, I loved it. You didn't really overdo it or anything, they both stayed in their characters. Good job.

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNN NNNNNNN
THIS WAS GOOD
AND HOT /SHOT

Me: Aww! Nezumi, you're just too cute sometimes!
Nezumi: Hey! *blushes*
Me: Admit it.
Nezumi: N..no *blushes harder*
Me: Come on, admit it. I won't stop pestering you until you do.
Nezumi: *face bright red* Fine, I admit it. I can be cute sometimes.
Me: *squeal* I knew you would admit it. Hey, Sion, did you get it?
Sion: Yep! *pats video recorder fondly*
Nezumi: *growls* Sion...
*Nezumi chases Sion around the room while I roll on the bed laughing*

Ahh!So cute!

OWO e.e hot hot hot hot hot love love love aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah me encantooo

Wow! This was absolutely amazing! I love how it's written and I love your choice of words.

Short and Sweet. I loved it.

Awesome. Especially at the end. :D

I am in love with your writing. Please keep writing stories for these two. You're absolutely amazing at conveying them and their feelings. Your fics are the best I've ever come across for these two. I'll probably have read and commented on all of your stories before the week is over haha (It would be sooner if college wasn't suddenly getting so crazy again).

Wow, very beautiful! You did a great job with characterization.

Damn. I loved it just as much as I did on DevArt and Tumblr. Now you know I'm truly staking you-I find you on everything!

This is a beautiful fanfiction. I cannot wait to hear more of you from a well loved fandom (of mine, at least).

3 Eternal love and hugs.

-Ec

i just love it! so beautifuly well written! and love the intense emotions in here, especially Nezumi thoughts of Sion. :)