I loved this story. Though I can’t say I loved the end I was hopeing for some major Raven/ Jason romance at the end.

Though I do have a minor question. Why was Raven even on trail they must have know she was azereathan even in the beginning you said her sister got her from Azarath. And I though they New she was from there otherwise why would her powers be sealed by Kori? So that really threw me off but other wise awesome job.

I liked it but the ending was rushed? confusing? maybe a little of both. It's like the connecting parts were sometimes missing. But overall I liked it so, Thank you for sharing :)

Love it!

I love you for writing this tale! This is an awesome fic... Great job! Best Rae-Red X fic I've read.

THIS BOOK I CAN'T EVEN I LOVE IT AND YOUR WRITING STYLE JUST UGH YES

YAY! GO KORIAND'R

Damn.

YAY!

GENIUS!

I AM LOVING THIS

Pfffft heh hahahaha! Tee! :) (::) - for you!

When I saw "My pervious captain", I was like waaaaaaaaaaaa?. And then my mind processed a bit and I was like soooooooooooo the previous captain was pervertic?! And then my processed a bit more and then I finally got it. It was a stupid spelling error.

Just simply amazing it was inspirational. I connected with the characters and it was a bit ooc but I still loved them thank you so much for the story. I felt as though I was in the book it was magical. Again thank you. Hope to read more from you. Byes.

I loved the story, only the end not much, I mean, both raven and jason go to the end not stay together, but hey, that does not take away points to the story, really great

Fantastic! This is one of the most creative, awesome, and well writen stories I have ever read! I was blown away by how amazingly you could twist this story from the old fairy tale, to a new creative story. You have major talent! again, one of the best stories I have ever read; as a book or on this site!