| Reviews for This time we do it right |
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   Murphz chapter 2 . 7/14 Good plot idea, bad execution. What sort of logic or good idea is it to start giving lectures to an entire great hall full of children just as they appear from the future and replace their counterparts from the past. One of the silliest story’s I’ve read in awhile. |
| xHFSxShadow chapter 16 . 3/12 I really really enjoyed this story, great work. |
| BillBrink chapter 16 . 1/25 This was my second time through and I enjoyed it just as much. Thank you for sharing this entertaining work. |
| Shinkai Sei-kan chapter 16 . 1/12 I'm rereading this now for the tenth time i think and i still love this fanfic so much. You've done great and made me love this Pairing so damn much! Good Job! ~ |
| Mark Sinfield chapter 16 . 11/28/2019 enjoyable |
| gginsc chapter 16 . 11/18/2019 Not too bad. Full of spelling and grammar errors and some words were use wrong, but still not too bad. |
| Dgf123 chapter 6 . 11/6/2019 Thhis is without doubt o e of my favourie stories ignorinv some of the spellin mistakes which do not seem to dtract from the story. However there is a serious omission, please, please give us the ztory of how Harry and daoh e got together, it does not need to include the war, just the romance. Keep up the fantastic stories. |
| wadeemily77 chapter 3 . 8/29/2019 the word fraction is for math. faction is more fitting word. tks |
| r.tidmore chapter 10 . 7/18/2019 have read this story several times and I still can't figure out how Snape was able to break the wards that an alert is keyed to Harry, Daphne and Tammy the elf, and none of them knew he was doing it. just something all writers need to watch out for a lot of these plotholes kills a story. |
| Winlyn chapter 16 . 6/21/2019 It was a good first fanfic... But the grammar and spelling were a bit off in places. I liked that Harry and Daphne came back as they were. It's the first time I've seen that done. I also liked how they dealt with their enemies. Thank you for the story! -Winlyn |
| nightwing27 chapter 10 . 6/9/2019 good thing in my story the badge will read draco malfoy future wife of tom riddle like his dad lol and good thing the welseys will be well; protected from gay old fool he will fail to control molly the potters will make sure it doesn't happen |
| Cwhit930 chapter 16 . 5/29/2019 Great story thanks for the share. Will check out what else you have created |
| continental-line chapter 15 . 4/26/2019 The DELETED SCENE was the better ending and more in keeping with this story's Harry Potter and would have been a better ending for this chapter. |
| SomeoneWithTasteDoA chapter 3 . 11/18/2018 I'll take Spell Check for 1000, Alex. Are you inbred or just stupid? |
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 16 . 11/8/2018 interesting tale |
