This is one of the best fics I've ever read! Thank you for writing this 3

I know I am reading this late, but I just had to say this is one of the best fan fiction stories I have read my entire life! It's awesome:) And your an amazing writer! All the other Outsider stories I have looked at always lead to me leaving halfway through the story but I was glued to my laptop when I read this! Thank you so much for this amazing story:) You should create a part 2! Thanks again! Your amazing!

I think soda sent Steve to go check on her because sodas at work and because he knows Steve wouldn’t try anything on her

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY I BEG OF U

More nurse!

I LOVE your story, but could you please try to cuss less? I'm not supposed to be reading any swearing but I can't help it. It's so addicting!

Soda and Makenzie shouldn't of taken a break! And why wouldn't she tell him anything?! I get to upset about fictional stories.

Hahahahahhahahahahahaha!the sound I made was NOT human

To fucking cute

absolutely loved this story! thankyou so much!

Obviously "him" is Billy.

its 1.30am I had to stay up and read this is was bloody good I hope you write more

Thanks for the story. It's great!

Hi

Oh my gosh... This was the only fanfiction that ever made me cry... It was so beautiful!