I loved this chapter, Al telling his story and them documenting it was such a beautiful moment. But, then it made me laugh imagining if Ed ever came out and heard that story and spent so long wondering how they knew his life story...and then found out it was Alphonse

Just read this today and Adored it! Fabulous work. Was more ever made?

Aw I really loved this :D I love how at this point both brothers are nerds in romance, like Ed with his alchemy filled proposal in the show and Al with his alkahestry inspired gift in this, I love it!

That was such a cute 2nd part to this! I was just awwing out loud the whole time (so I'm glad I was the only one in the room lolol) and Ed and Winry having their wedding was just so sweet and well written!

Aw this chapter was so cute! Also I know you wrote this years ago, but I'm so glad I found it again so I could finally finish it! Your write everyone so in character, I'm thoroughly enjoying it :D

I think I commented on the first few chapters a while ago, and here I am, finally continuing your fic! This chapter was not only hilarious, but very fun and interesting to read! I always love seeing Ed from other people's perspective, because to an outsider, he's such a hot heated grump ahaha and I love that you included that. If there's any more chapters like these I will very excited :')

I know I'm super late but was there ever a sequel to this amazing story xx

They better kiss at some point. And seriously, what was the book?( on chapter 11)

I better find out what the book in Chapter 10 is

LOVE LOVE LOVE! This was such a heart warming story of AlMei!

It’s 2 AM in my country, but I couldn’t stop reading before I finished!
Your fanfiction was all I was looking for and be sure I’ll read others from your profile!
I hope you don’t mind with my late reviews, I just couldn’t don’t say anything about some chapters.
Fifty chapters and then they confessed their love, it was so beautiful and so easy going.
I wish I could turn back time and read this while you were posting!
This fic was good for my soul! Thank you

I was sure it was Ed, Mei wouldn’t do this.
Come on, Alphonse! Everybody is waiting you to confess her!

OMG, I can’t believe that Mei almost read it and I can’t believe Alphonse didn’t tell the truth to Ed. They’re brothers, I thought he would like to share this feeling with Ed

I think Al is almost dying too much ... but ok.
If I were in time, I would say to you to make something happens to Mei.
Going to the next one because I’m curious

I can’t believe that they’re traveling for a year and they didn’t confess their feelings!
And I can’t believe Lan Fan got pregnant!