I know this is old now, but I wish you would continue this, I love where this is going !
Cheers !

Wonderful story but it left me hanging! Updates, pretty, pretty please?

Im am kind of enjoying this bitter Peter... But we know eventually he will let go of his anger and maybe start to forgive Neal a bit

nicely emotionally charged.

I like your version, Peter human reaction is real

Oh god yet ANOTHER poor widdle Neal?

For gods sake watch the damn series and get at least a vague handle on the character.

This is stale and hackneyed, the idea's been done a thousand times since the episode and most of them were better.

Oh I so,do hope Peter and Neal can get this patched up between them.

JeanneZ84

Love this! Update soon!

you are right this has been done a lot of times, but every story has its own special touch each one has a different ending and as fans we need that variety to keep our imagination flowing, and our obsession with neal in check so please keep writing i love this chapter i think it was necessary to see neal state of mind to see how much all this affect him, you have a great story in your hands please keep writing soon XD

PS I am a Spanish speaker so please forgive my lack of fluency in English i am still learning

This is shaping up to be a great story please continue

Can you please update more today?

I feel bad for Neal.

I wanna see how this all turns out.

JeanneZ84

Very powerful start.

Jeanne84

I love this!