Awww

You have GOT to be kidding me! MORE Phinabella? As if there wasn't enough already. You guys need to get your heads out of the gutters and stop just following what everyone else likes. Be your own person and come up with a more creative pairing. Even FERBella for crying out loud anything but PHINabella. If you see this post and agree with me speak now and we'll stomp of WAY over used pairings like Phinabella.

Ok, so no one asked me this. I forgot this little detail. Have you ever wondered where Isabella's ID, would be? Actually, a small Identification card may do big things. It played a very important role in my story.

So Isabella checked her bag at her office and it wasn't there so her friend, Emily, said that it might be at her house,Isabella then felt relieved. When she got home she checked every inch in her house but couldn't find it. The following morning, there was a surprise Phineas gave to Isabella. And there were more the whole day. Now my question is, how will Phineas know where Isabella lives and works? Of course, he knew because of the ID. The ID was left by Isabella back at Phineas' house, to make it clear, one of the things that made Isabella and Phineas together again was Isabella's worker's ID. Some people think that Identification cards are useless, but now I prove it is not. The ID is one of the best creation on this world. It can rejoin two people.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing people... :)

My next story is about Christmas, to be exact, "The 12 days of Christmas". It is a story about 12 Phineas and Ferb characters, having their Christmas wishes come true... Maybe I'll finish it this weekend. Too bad it's still Monday huh?

Nice little story. I will say your writing is improving, as your work is not as cluttered as it was before. Something else I noticed, however, was how you ended certain dialogue sentences. For example, on of your lines was:

"Wow that was a sweet love story of yours." She said, "So if you don't mind, I'll be getting back to work." I said

This line should be written like this:

"Wow that was a sweet love story of yours," she said. "So if you don't mind, I'll be getting back to work," I said.

Just a little differences in the punctuation, but it will help you a lot in your writing.

That said, I liked how Isabella tried to fix things with Phineas, even at the expense of her review. And I like how Phineas went overboard trying to get her back, too. You have a lot of good ideas and I hope to see even more from you soon!

SO CUTE!

Well done. And if you wanna do a sequel...for this sequel (XD) GO FOR IT!

Really cute.

And if you want to write a sequel that's completely up to you. I'd read it.