This was so good! I loved the end because you mix perfect the sexy part and the feelings, thanks a lot for sharing this :)

Takari!

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

I can't believe that tk's seducing kari!
(also, I really want the reward you said on chapter1; thank you)

It was a steamy fic, wheeeeew, but a little romantic at the end. I liked the ending

Sky

that was left kind of open is there a sequel to this?

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I loved it, was sad it ended tho! :( great job!

It was really cute and smexy :D
Thanks a lot for your story !

Nice and quite hot xP I love both of them. Good job ;)

It was good to see them develop a need for each other in the end, especially TK developing feelings for Kari. I wish the fic had lasted longer but overall it was a great story :)

Only critique I have to add is that the story moves forward so fast.

You can almost not even enjoy the previous actions of TK and Kari as there is already the next one. I think just some longer pauses and more thoughts from the characters, like in your other stories would be nice.

But still it's a nice read and I would like, like everyone here, more of it!

More, more more! Me want more :) i looove this story pleeaaaase make it last long!

awesome :)