Wonderfully written; I really love it. Your writing style is great. It's been years, though, so I wonder if your writing style as changed. Anyway, this is brilliant; I totally headcanon this.

Though, I would love for Setsuka to meet Kyoko's version of Kuon and Bo the Chicken as well, so I was slightly disappointed when I didn't see them. Mio, Setsu, Natsu, Kuon, and Bo. What a comedic combination. It would be interesting if you transformed this one-shot into a collection of one-shots regarding the interactions of all of these characters.

Nevertheless, this was an entertaining and fantastic read. I hope you will decide to continue to write more Skip Beat! stories again.

Have a nice day, and may you be filled with inspiration and motivation. If not, that's cool too. Humans have always been rather lazy bums.

This idea is amazing. I've fallen in love with your setup. Would you mind if I took the setup and expanded on it for a few more scenes? I'd be sure to give proper credit for the idea back to you and this story. It's just fired up my imagination. Thanks for a marvelous story and let me know what you think. I'll respect your wishes either way.

Love this fic! Though I think young Kuon coud go along with some of Kyouko's other roles -like the traditional-japanese-girl, for exemple, or the angel...

A really interesting take on Kyoko's head-space, and what happens to her characters when the cameras are off.

Oh my gosh, brilliant! (!) But where's Kuon?!

Oh, that's cute. You're right; given the personalities of Kyouko's characters, they don't seem to be the type who'll get along all that well.

cool!

great work and love the castle in the mind idea. It would be interesting to see more characters, maybe like the angel Kyoko played in the PV with Sho?

I like this idea of them liveing in her soul type of thing. It's rather original and interesting. Id like it if u wrote an actual longer story based on this fact.

Kyoko's mind is a rather scary place. Excellent.

Oooh! This is great. But can someone tell me why "Young Kuon" isn't in there? I reeeeeeeeeeeally want him in this story. Maybe Setsu could find him in a different room somewhere or something. Oh yeah! What about the Angel? Though she isn't necessary she certainly would be useful. Keep up the good work!

All of the characters Kyouko plays are so strong, it's really fun to see how they interact with one another. I thought it was also very appropriate that they were in a fairytale castle. That just screams Kyouko!

Thanks for the enjoyable read! :D

I think this can get real interesting real fast. : ) Setsu is just as strong-willed as Natsu, and not as easily dismissed by Ren (as a persona, since he would never accept Kyoko as acting like Natsu to be her real self/feelings, but Setsu's adoration and love might slip past his guard long enough to create some chaos). Looking forward to more!

I love this story soooo much! Are you really intending to make it oneshort with this ending? but I want more~~I think other than Mio, Natsu and Setsu, Kyoko also possess Kuon soul and the angel is considered one of her soul too (?). This is a really really nice work. Thank you for giving me this happiness _

LOL...awesome and I totally agree with you...they would tried to killed each other and with Setsuka worrying about Cain then she would most likely caused havoc for Kyoko soul, but then again both Kyoko/Setsu worrying about Ren/Cain I could see Setsu getting her way. (*_*)