Wow, it's amazing! I love how dark and messed up it is! Short but still has a lot of emotions in it. It's so interesting. I know that it's end, but I still want to know the rest :D

Aye, dark.

Messed up, kinky. Interesting. Great work.
Could you do a sequel? Like, maybe Shizuo gets knocked unconscious and when he wakes up, Doctor Shinra is staring at the scars and asking where the heck they came from.

I like it! XD

Wow its like one long flowing poetry, of shizuo's thought. I really loved it. It made me think of izaya as the artist and shizuo as the canvas but even more then that, i loved how you described shizuo thinking of how hopeless he is, how he will forever be this nitter monster in some way. Like he's accepted this. And he knows that izaya playing with his knife (which i also always thought suited izaya. Izaya is a sadist as he's also a masochist. But definitely a sadist. And sadists love knives. Its slow and painful. )will he knows that izaya playing with him by cutting him will be the death of him perhaps but he merely waits in a passive manner of a masochist. I really love how you portrayed the more darker side of their relationship.

Also following even if its completed. Because. You never know lol.

That has got to be one of the coolest fanfictions I've ever read!

Wow! Really great job!

*is grinning from ear to ear* Oh I like this story very much, Very Very much. And I am convinced that Izaya and Shizuo are really your characters because of how well you write them. I really enjoy how you describe everything going through their heads and what they're doing, you make it so fun to read, it's like being in the room with them . Thank you so much for writing.

wow this story is so dark and beautiful. i hope you continue to write stories like this.

ohhh im grining like a idiot over here :)

awesome writing :)

this is just amazing you did a good job staying in character :)

*adds to favs*

Oh my gosh, the descriptions literally gave me goosebumps. I love the way you portrayed them. It all seems so fitting too (not to mention HOT). Love your writing~