Reviews for Everlasting Promises
Phoenix chapter 18 . 7/29
About my earlier review: I am a person who invests myself greatly in any story I read. Not to threaten you, but more of a disclaimer/warning: Sequels to Everlasting Promises might start popping up in half a years time when I finally give up on waiting. I know I sound like a spoiled brat, sorry, but I can't think of any other way to say this. BTW, I am still a immature child, so pls cut me some slack on my vocab choices and rudeness. (That sounded even more spoiled brattish. Um...)
Burn Bright,
Phoenix
ThatDude chapter 18 . 7/29
Are u ever going to update? Been 8 years since you last did. If not, could you post a AN telling us what ur plans for the fic are?
Phoenix chapter 18 . 7/29
Can you please update n bring Percy back to earth? The post-death and galactic part has been pretty weird and I liked the pertemis on earth. It doesn't feel right to have such a touching story turned into a Star Trek or Star Wars thing. It feels like Chaos should have revived him, trained him and sent him back to Earth, etc... I'm also all for stopping the story at Percy's funeral if Star doesn't feel like continuing (Because he hasn't updated his Twitter in 5 years...) It was touching and (in my opinion) the end of Everlasting Promises. After that, it was like "Percy Jackson, Galactic hero and the Guardians of the Galaxy, etc, etc, etc. The original storyline was amazing and I hope you guys choose to return to that style of writing. So please resume update and bring back the original spirit of the story Star!
As for the questions asked:
1)Percy will always be Percy. So...
2) They were too much like Olympian VS Olympian, not like the genuine and realistic fight scenes in Chap 16 and before. Those were powerful being VS powerful being but they were realistic at least. These are basically throw magic at each other with insanely fast reflexes while sparring at a crazy speed, or punch each other through floors, columns, buildings, etc. until the other dies.
3)Sry, I'm not a cook, so my opinion is probably worthless...
4) Look, I love this fanfic, but in my heartfelt opinion, I feel that returning to earth and the Pre-Percy Death style of writing would be better. (As said above, but I have to keep saying this) This feels a bit rushed and the time skips, while they didn't really bother me, I can't help but think: What is he feeling? Who does he train with? What does he actually do? I miss the original style of description where every thing is described. Percy sparring with the automatons for example. Another one is where he teaches the hunters how to dual wield. Those scenes had some timeskips, but they were "a few hours" or "half a day later", etc. Those detailed scenes was what set this fic apart from the rest. I would love to see a return of that, no matter how long it takes to write them. By that, I don't mean "pressure author into writing" but "I don't care if I have to wait 3 years if I get a chapter written in the style of the first few chapters". So please, please, please a return to the old writing style of more detail and emotional scenes with fight scenes used as a tool to help the emotion, not the central part of the writing. That said, this style of writing certainly has it's appeals. i would understand this if you are using this as filler/seat warmer in between major chapters. Maybe you could make all this galactic thing Chaos's version of hardcore training?
To conclude, please go back to the style of writing that was prevalent in the earlier chapters. Of course, I understand if you are busy with professional life as a pianist. If you are, I suggest (by the way, you should not listen to me, I am not even 16 yet) that you end the story at Percy's funeral. But, thanks for the story, Star and beta. I would like to ask if Star is Ok. He has not updated his twitter account for 5 years and has not updated this story for 8 years. I am genuinely worried about his well being. Please post a note or something here if you are ok, Star, and tell us the fate of the story. Nogoodnms promised no more year-long gaps between chapters all over again, as well as teasing us with Chapters 19 and 20, but you have been silent. There is someone on twitter whom I suspect is Nogoodnms who is called Pallan Minerva who was chatting with Starblade176 (Don't worry, I didn't stalk or anything. I just searched "nogoodnms on twitter") He seems to be pretty active, so if he is Nogoodnms, then he is probably fine. So please, please please update and bring the story back Star.
I am not posting this with any account because of circumstances. Hope u understand nogoodnms and Starblade176, that this is not because of any desire to flame u guys and then be anonymous.
Burn Bright,
Phoenix
P.S. If possible I will republish this review wherever you guys are likely to see it, and under a genuine identity. I hope you guys are good!
GenericPjoName chapter 18 . 7/28
Why do authors make characters retards? You get asked to throw away your weapons and fight hand-to-hand, you go “Lol, nah, fuck you,” and decapitate them with your bladed weapon of choice.
GenericPjoName chapter 18 . 7/28
You’ve just given people the ability to airdrop dick pics into people’s eyeballs. Good job.
GenericPjoName chapter 17 . 7/28
1) Seven miles is not 40,000 feet. It’s 36,960.

2) With a standard stair height of 7.5 inches, he’s just climbed 59,152 stairs including the last floor.
GenericPjoName chapter 17 . 7/28
Humans use all of their brain. Not just 10%.
Reader071203 chapter 18 . 7/28
Hey Where's the next chapter ?
GenericPjoName chapter 15 . 7/28
I forgot to mention the bruises in the cheek means she burst capillaries in the face and defied time seeing as fresh bruises are red, not blue, black, or purple.
GenericPjoName chapter 15 . 7/28
Artemis acted like the Chief in SMM2.

Either way, in order to send Percy flying, she’d need to cancel out the 220 pounds of Percy gravity is exerting on him. This would require 978.609 just to counteract gravity and to send him flying, say 3m/sec, she’d need to put a force of 6600 newtons, 1,483.739 pounds of force, 183lbs or 814N more than elite level boxers to the chin known to cause knockouts not to mention the slap fest which would cause a slew of concussions, the stomach punches probably causing severe organ damage to the intestines, stomach, liver, kidneys, and/or gallbladder, causing severe infection risk and or leakage of stomach acid/contents into the abdominal cavity, extreme internal bleeding, broken ribs, teeth, and jaw, with a damaged windpipe to boot. That’s not even mentioning her going at light speed thereby dooming the entirety of Earth as explained in this video here: httpsyoutu. be/C3DxippZwcs
GenericPjoName chapter 11 . 7/27
Pushing a nerve does not cause paralysis regardless of what Star Trek may tell you.
GenericPjoName chapter 8 . 7/27
You’re using both sides of your brain at almost all times regardless of what level of consciousness. Shutting down one side would not only limit either logical/creative thought, it would also shut down the opposing side of the body because the left and right brain controls the right and left sides of the body respectively.

Also, as shown in split brain patients where the brain hemispheres’ connection is severed, if shown something in the left eye, they can visualize it, but can’t say what they’re seeing. Same with feeling it with the left hand, they’re unable to say what they’re feeling. So if he shuts down the left side of his brain, he both can’t control the right side of his body leaving him liable to fall off his tree branch, but it would also not allow him to talk.
GenericPjoName chapter 6 . 7/27
Instead of the gods, httpsyoutu. be/w3nFWbRSYn8
Guest chapter 7 . 7/24
I truthfully liked this story until he died. The post death part was kinda...I dunno how to explain it. I didn't like the post-death part that much.
TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 2 . 7/20
Hades, so far, even thought it was two lines of duologue, is my favorite God in this book.
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