Magical. Wonderful. Breath-taking.
Thank you for sharing this!

Such a great story I love how the story went back and forth between Snow and Emma's pregnancies

This was wonderful. I wonder if those are the thought processes Emma and Snow really went through?

This story left me crying. You are such a talented writer. I LOVED THIS.

Still working my way through all your HG & OUaT stories. Really loved this one, showing how they are mirroring each other, but still take the on the challenge of pregnancy and become a mother in such different ways. Really loved it.

Keep writing. :)

PLEASE write more Snow/Charming! There isn't enough, and you are the best at it! I'm begging you!

Oh MAN, the parallel structure of this story just shattered my heart. Snow's progression was beautifully done, and GOD I wanted to hug Emma so badly! LOVE THIS!

this was beautiful! i hope u write more snow/charming :)

Wow. That was absolutely gorgeous, and totally fits in to what's happened on the show so far. I'm going to consider this story to be the events leading up to Emma's and Henry's births. So, so wonderful, such a pleasure to read, especially as the characters were so spot-on. I can't wait to see more from you.

;_; I feel so sad. It feels so real, y'know? All of the worries of being a mother, all of the sadness that comes with giving it up, and all of the choices you never hear about if you're the kid who got abandoned. Life is hard. Even fairy tale life is hard. ;_; Again, I look forward to reading more from you.

Now if only the actual show carried the eloquence that your telling did. Truly touching and had me tearing up from the half way point. Beautiful.

I cried at the very end...so depressingly beautiful. And I loved how you kept everything close to canon as possible (like not mentioning Henry's father's name).

Great story! Loved the song choice. I liked that you paralleled the stories of the two mothers who had to give up their children. The interactions between Snow and James were so sweet. Nice job, thanks for sharing!

Simply wonderful, love the intercutting between Snow and Emma's pregnancies. The progression from elation to fear for their fates is heartbreaking. Kudos on how you've written James, Snow and Emma, the characterizations were spot on.

This is so good! I love the little parallels of Emma and Snow's pregnancy's. I just love how everything fit together and the Snow/Charming was adorable. Great fic!