Wonderful story! I loved it! Although I admit I almost found myself thinking it was going to be a happy ending. It seemed so close to Romeo and Juliet that I had prepared myself for a tragedy at the beginning, but I just got so into it I forgot that it was bound not to end well ' that's fascinating though, about the Mulberry Trees. I really loved that aspect of the story. And the fact that it was actually based on a Grecian story? Fascinating. i loved the KuroFai part of it AND i learned something Heartbreaking, absolutely heartbreaking!

I loved your story, made me tear up, and I was thrilled to see you based this off of Pyramus and Thisbe! You unfortunately see so many based of Romeo and Juliet, which I completely agree was infatuation, so it was a rather nice change of pace. And very well written, I look forward to seeing something else from you involving this pairing!

so sad,but still loved it.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

so sad! but so original and very beautiful!

lol pyramis and thisbe as kurogane and fai is actually kind of funny V_V i apologize for my sick sense of humor

but i loved this :D

you obviously worked very hard

good job!