I just read this whole story today, and I think it's really great! I'm interested to see where this goes, if your muse returns again. Very nice job, regardless!

Review: ...Yea, I kind of love it...

Awww, so sweet! Love this story!

This is soooooo cute!

Can't wait for another update! :)

~RC8D

Ya please update soon this is a great story please update soon I'll be waiting for the next chapter rinto is just so awsome in this story :D

Cool I orignally favorites your first version but then it go discontinued so I favorites this one instead I love the new rintos personality better he was to stupid before please update soon I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D

Aww~ I actually missed this... HOW COULD I? I'm really sorry, for not reviewing earlier... for some reason, my alert thing didn't show this in my inbox... and so, I didn't read this before...

Anyway, Rinto is a very loving brother in this isn't he? I like it! And Rin looks so vulnerable, so fragile... I feel sad... that the 'father' had to go drink with his said 'friends'... *sigh* Happiness will never stay long, would it?

Oh well, update soon!

Seriously, Rinto... I just wanna kidnap you and make you my brother...

Anyway, awesome as always! :D

This. Is. AWESOME!

The whole chapter went smoothly. The part when Rin's dad was torturing Yumi, I can feel the tensed atmosphere.

GJ! Keep up the good work!

Also... I wish I have a brother like Rinto... He's so SWEET!

:.. I LIKE THIS BETTER.

I dunno why. I just do :D

WHAT! YOU'RE REWRITING THE STORY! oh well. i loved the other one. i'm sure i'll love this one. I like the story so far