Oof. This was a delight to read. I'm hopeful to see more within the foreseeable future.

im impressed.
i know this story is quite old, but i had to review because i really like the way you handle the bleeding effect here. its scary, how it is not clear if this is ezio, or desmond, or something in between.
now i can imagine how desmond felt with the bleeding effect becoming worse.

Wow... This is very powerful because the ending is unclear. Either Desmond was having a severe Bleed or Ezio was somehow there. Considering all the tiny information regarding Ezio's experiences in the game, I would say it was the former but who knows. Captured the subtlety of Bleeding effect perfectly - you don't know when it is happening or when it stops. Great work. This is a gem.

Lol poor Desmond and Ezio!

Ha ha ha, you should write a sequel, maybe where they can start talking to one another, it doesn't matter that u haven't played, it's good.

I absolutely love this! Why isn't this an actual story?

Bwahahaha, amusing ending. And I see the potential this story has to continue into something longer, if you ever get in the mood to, that is.

I really like the way you wrote this, and the ending is very funny (idk if it's supposed to be). Anyways, I enjoyed it.

Awesome story. It really deserves more reviews

Love it very well writen

I gotta say, for someone who never played the game this was pretty awesome. I wish there was more. Good job!

I would have loved to read more into this world. this was far too short for my tastes. huh, not bad for someone that claims never to have played the game. I'll be looking forward to reading any related to this particular series from you in the future, coal ]