Reviews for The Betrayed Sage
T M C A W chapter 3 . 5/25
Damn I hate when a good stories die
thegrison chapter 2 . 3/18
So many mistakes. Make it believable, get a beta reader and good luck.
thegrison chapter 1 . 3/18
Lol 99% of the people think there are steel toe combat boots. This is NOT TRUE. Steel toe will tear your feet apart if you have to walk or run in them for 5-7 hours a day. Look at military boots and you will see no steel toe boots but in the maintenance/machine shops. They only wear them in the shop. Kicking in steel toes will break your toes and/or foot bones. Yes they make the steel toe combat boots but those are NOT real combat boots. Those are for civilians.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8
You know ai wish the author or author's would at least finish there fics like this one ik this would be a really good one to read base on the description but no I wish people would finish there stories
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 5/12/2019
J'aime beaucoup. Continue .
Pushi19 chapter 3 . 5/6/2019
Update it soon please
Borello chapter 3 . 3/14/2018
damnit. i hoped to read how naruto destroy konoha.
lou2003us chapter 3 . 2/18/2018
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Javicho99's chapter 3 . 1/5/2018
I liked your fic, though unfinished it was a good one, not perfect but still.
Happy New Year 2018 by the way!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2017
If you're still alive, please come back to "The Betrayed Sage".
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 8/15/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
cespericueta35 chapter 3 . 3/3/2017
NO HAREM! FINISH THO.. ONLY NARUHINA STORY!
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 12/7/2016
that was great keep the chapters coming
Emperor-Aurora chapter 3 . 8/30/2016
The good one's are always abandoned goddamn it.
ethan.lukkar chapter 3 . 7/1/2016
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
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