Greetings! Here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still thinking on ways to continue your stories! First off, before I say anything else...THANK YOU FOR YOUR SERVICE! I support our troops not matter what the media tries to vomit up to make them look bad, or what non-military supporters have to say! I appreciate the sacrifice you men and women make for this great country! Now, since that is out of the way...LOL, just wanted to say that I am glad I took the recommendation of KingKakashi to read your story, and I really really enjoyed it! I am hoping that it isn't dead, simply on hiatus until your muse decides to let it out of her hot little hands into your skilled hands to pass on the next chapters to us who wait patiently for the story to continue! I hope tho, that kishibaka didn't destroy your love of Naruto and your will to continue this story with any of his cannon story and the continuation, but as you said in your profile, you don't have to follow cannon, so there you go! Again, I thank you for your service, and I am hopeful that this story isn't dead! As for the end of this chapter, and what Orochimaru is going to be studying, I think it may be a piece of the overmind...a hybrid, or a protoss...LOL, again, here's hoping to see future chapters of this story!

This sucks

Very good story, I hope it continues, greetings, see you, bye!

Nothing but naruto being a big wuss

Great job please continue

I thought sasuke already knew itachi was at konoha during the invasion

you put Kakashi when you should've put sasuke near the end there lol

The cave, knives, and seal are completely uncalled for and a very bad way for a quick power boost. I don’t see how it would even fit in with naruto’s character...unless the author is trying to literally tear down the old naruto and make him into something else completely.

If I'm correct, there is no team leader bc they are supposed to work together and all make joint decisions.

Art is an explosion makes no sense for Naruto to say contextually.

So kingdom hearts when on captain hooks ship

you gotta stop with cutting off your text in the middle of a chapter... it does not make it fun and makes you look like a 3 year old trying to write fanfiction. You have just lost any and all worth you had for writing a really good fanfiction because you decided to pull this crap.

damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter.

Boring

Loved this story thus far