Reviews for Fragmentary Blue |
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beetkey chapter 1 . 6/24 jdfvbsukjf i have two (2) modes for misa and they're 1. how can she exist, and 2. how can she exist (in a good way) |
yingyang5 chapter 1 . 4/1 this last sentence... Lights story is just so sad. He kept hurting himself and lost himself while hurting others. He was just a boy, but with L gone, his first friend, there i nothing left for him. Maybe I'm just overreacting, but I think his story is tragic and your story nearly made me cry. Thank you |
Kira chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 I feel so sad gonna go play Decpacito That was lovely (Kira-not-Kira, the cons of stealing another’s name to use as your internet pseudonym) |
Dragonlord1199 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Poor poor Misa |
Senile-felineS chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 That was really great. It's pretty similar to my one deathnote fanfic although i can't do slow building introspection like this, that's a skill. |
deactivated10-16 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013 This was beautifully written. I loved that she's looking for Light in everything, and I think you captured her mindset about Kira perfectly- that sort of fevered devotion because there's nothing else to hold onto. Misa has so much depth here, and I found it heartbreaking when she talked about trying to see Light in the shinigami's eyes. Fantastic work. |
Ink Reservoir chapter 1 . 12/21/2012 Ah, hollowness. You captured Misa's character perfectly. |
Adala chapter 1 . 8/4/2012 This was very sad and touching. I did enjoy it. I think "now that she can here the silence" is supposed to be "now that she can hear the silence". I was a bit surprised that you made Matsuda an alcoholic. But in the time that apparently has passed, a lot of things can happen. Cheers! Adala |
Pensulliwen chapter 1 . 4/3/2012 Great fic. Repetitive at points, but I think it was supposed to be. I can't think of much constructive criticism at the moment, just *sobs forever* |
aiushtha chapter 1 . 12/31/2011 That was very poignant. I felt really bad for Misa. :( |
plannedbyReaperLight chapter 1 . 12/20/2011 Aw, very nice and very sad. I feel bad for both of them. |
Sashocirrione chapter 1 . 12/7/2011 Thank you. It's very introspective and very in-character for Misa. |