Aw this is adorable! Great writing skill and character :) keep it up

* sniff sniff* this is amazing! i love it! keep writing!

LOL! I knew it! Terra and Aqua are neighbours! That should be fun growing up! xD Hmmm, bitter 'enemies' until the end huh? Well let's hope that doesn't last long. I'm sure having dinner with Aqua and her parents would've been better than having leftovers Terra. ;P Poor guy! I love the set up so far though and Terra and Aqua's parents (or should I say mothers) seem really awesome! 8D If they're going to be showing up more in the story, I can't wait to see how they'll help their children become friends (and something more). xD

Keep up the great work! Terra agonizing about his feelings for Aqua seems like something he would do! :3

Haha, that argument between Terra and Aqua about 'He's/She's not my friend!' was too cute! I can't wait to see how this unfolds.

Keep it up!

LOL! young lovw :D

Ah~ Super nice! Refreshing and cute. I love fanfics of Aqua and Terra when they are young.

Aww, this is so cute! I can't wait to see more!

This is so cute that I'm already liking it so far! xD I too am guilty of using the whole "childhood sweethearts" in probably all of my TerQua stories thus far, but it's hard not to! xD I love the fact that Terra's trying to act like a big boy...only to fail at certain times. That sounds so him. I wonder how he'll grow up with that attitude? :'D But aaaahhh! He's so pessimistic when it came to Aqua and her fairy tales. ;-; Good thing Aqua's there to put him in his place...sort of. That new neighbour of his by the way... I have a feeling it's Aqua familly. LOL Yay! Zack and Axel are Terra's friends! That's so awesome. :D And do I sense Zack having a crush on Aerith (though he deals it)? I'm hoping so. I love Zerith too much, but hey, it's your call. xD

So far, you're doing a really good job and it's only the first chapter. :) I love how you incorporated the Disney versions of the fairy tales when Aqua was explaining them to Terra. It fits since this IS Kingdom Hearts. LOL Also, that last line of Terra's thoughts...LOVED IT! I can't wait to see how this story unfolds! Keep up the good work! :3 *thumbs up*