I like the story but i'm quite confused: aren't the night elves more nocturnal ? Night, elune, the magic of the moon... Etc ?

Wow , just wow. I’ve read this story multiple times but I normally skip the authors notes. I’m impatient like that XD but I read this last part and I am extremely impressed , you did this last chapter on morphine? My god I couldn’t have done something even close to this quality in my best state. You are truly a remarkable writer and I wish the best for you even though you probably won’t continue with this story since it’s been a few years. I hope you someday decide to complete this story because it’s probably one of the best ones I’ve read!

YOUR DESCRIPTIONS ARE AMAZING

AMAZING WRITER!

You have an intriguing thought here, but this seems a little strange. Galen seems very abusive. Why would Marcail want to be with him? Especially since his siblings want her gone. Lavena and her father seem to be on Marcails side as well, it would seem they all would have a common goal in letting her go. There's just too much Stockholm syndrome stuff going on. Galen has no redeeming qualities to warrant her affection.

I read this all in one fell swoop. I really enjoyed this fanfic. Definitely a fun read, and even if you don't come back to write any more on this, just know - it's great as is, and I would be happy to read more of it, but I understand what it's like to have a piece of work for such a long extent of time, and the consideration of coming back to it. I love these kind of star crossed stories, and fanfiction is just so much fun!

Her brother has a valid point. Marcail will always end up having to do what others want of her first when really, she is in charge of her happiness. The quick grab and run, was interesting. She definitely is shaping up to be a very interesting character.

Ohh, the blood thing is very interesting. I like the camaraderie between the two siblings. Interesting so far. I look forward to the next chapter.

Nice story.
But it's like stockholm syndrome on the move.

Absolutely an amazing story! Please, please come back and finish!

hi! i hope that you update son! :)

So much passion in this forbidden romance, I absolutely love it! I hope you're alright, dear author, and that one day you'll continue the story. I truly hope for it cause it's really amazing and I'm sure a lot of people is waiting with me :)

I must say i love your story! I hope you'll find the inspiration and energy to write another chapter eventually and that you'll feel better soon.

YOU. ARE. SO. AWESOME! The last few days have been rough on me and seeing the two updates just made my day a little better! THE STORY IS STILL GREAT I LOVE IT!

Please do take your time to get better. I understand the struggle so, sending you all the virtual hugs and kisses to you! _ Hope you feel better soon!

So glad you're back to this story!

It's really exciting to see!

I hope you feel well soon. Migraines are a horrible thing to experience. Take all your time to rest at home and I hope you'll be around to feeling better shortly. Looking forward to the next update, but of course take all the time you need (;