This was a beautifully heart wrenching story.
Thank you for posting.

That broke and warmed my heart at the same time, you're an amazing writer thank you for that fic

Awww Jack you're awesome! XDXD But yeah love that line of Are you two married? and then the rest is great!

Love love LOVE!

I loved Jack helping River by getting her to her hubby.

Well, I cried when I read this...
Good job with this! It's a beautiful story!

I would absolutely love it if u wrote another chapter about how river acted upon waking up! Anyways, loved it so much!

i love this i know it was meant to be a one shot but i think you should continue it its really good

Oh wow. Your notifications would be telling you that I'm favouriting nearly all of your stories -I just decided to post a REALLY big review for the very last story of yours that I'd read(I hope you don't mind, but the sheer number of your stories is daunting, and I really preferred devouring them all in one stretch!). But I really couldn't just go past this story without a review.

So, this is pure perfection. River is incredibly, heartwrenchingly believable. Her cold assassin's demeanour alternating with her passion and her anguish was just, just... fantastic! I loved your dynamic between River and Jack(in your other fics, too) -they'd make perfect best buddies, almost a brother-sister pair(although Jack wouldn't like THAT). Brilliant, absolutely brilliant job. I really have no other words to express how incredibly perfect this story is. Thank you for a lovely, lovely read.

love it! "Timey Wimey, my ass!" you really should write more river jack fics there really good

Meh its good and its okay

wow, fascinating! just one thing - isn't jack alive not just because river wasn't trying, but because he CAN'T die? unless it's different in this fic - but it doesn't say. anyway, it's amazing overall!

All these Jack and River stories make me hope that we see them together in the series as for this, fun reed!

"Timey Wimey, my ass!"

LET ME LOVE YOU. That was brilliant.

That's wonderful ! Jack is perfect and River is really heartbreaking, I'm glad you finally brought a "happy" ending !