An interesting premise, but the execution leaves a lot to be desired. I'm out.

i Hate when there is hidden character hidding in the shadows it's fucking iritating.

Why would Draco be able to return to Hogwarts for 7th Year when it’s known he let the Death Eaters in to kill Dumbledore?

Yeah, that's the ticket! Start off a potential relationship with emotional manipulation! That's just GRAND! Surely everything will go swimmingly from there! No chance things could go horribly wrong!

In case the sarcasm flew over your head, this reaction on Hermione's part was just stupid, bordering on psychopathic.

Not to mention her feeling she had the right to "punish" him for not dropping all of his secrets in her lap at the first opportunity. Seriously?

Does she perhaps mean like she did with her own feelings toward him? That's important too, but she didn't DIVE at the chance to tell him about it, now did she, for fear of how he'd react.

That's how he felt, about telling her... yet she thinks she has the right to "punish" him for doing the same thing she did? Does that mean he has the right to "punish" her right back?

Seriously, this last part is just messed up.

Set up a patreon or go fund me, it'll help if only a little bit. You are a REALLY good author and I know that people who have followed you for even a little while will want to help. You don't have to, but think about it. 72-84 Hours a week is a death sentence, no one should have to work that much. Please, as a person, take care of yourself, you are more important than any fic or book.

Great hidden puppeter in the shadow well it means that it's time to drop this...

Hey take care of yourself a do what makes you happy. You're a good author and good luck on your original works. Keep on keepin on

Your a great writer, this story is fraking awesome. Write on your time no one else's. Keep trying to fine things that make you happy depression is a Bitch, but there are Lots of ways around or through it. Can't wait for more of this story, thanks for the update

This story is great so far, but going back and forth at the end was not really needed and a little sickish just saying. Otherwise like I said great so far.

update please!

This is a lovely story and you are a lovely writer

I really love this story, been reading it non-stop for the last few days.

Sorry to hear about all your struggles, just know that all the people that read your stuff consider themselves your friends, even never having met you, so do I as well. Keep on doing your thing. Find your fire and keep going.

The night is always darkest before the dawn.

I'm sorry to hear about your financial difficulties and I hope that things get easier for you soon. I can tell from this story that you are truly a great writer. Hold on to that dream of yours and I know you have the makings of a great author. All my best wishes to you, friend.

WHO IS SHADOW? lol and love it can't wait to read more.

Love it