I enjoy reading this

hmmm getting better.

I don't think I would get in a car with that angry of a person.

CONTINUE THE FICCCCCC ! plz?

I'm getting batman vibes! Not wanting to kill enemies but still trying to work on the side of justice...
Anyways, it works. Keep it up!

Very nice ending and chapter overall, looking forward to the next :D

Oooh, loving how the plot develops so far :D Daniel's becoming quite cold hearted, wondering if there's a little more to him

Another really cool chapter, it's all coming together now :')

Love the OC daniel, love the character interaction and I think I finally spotted a mistake which lets me know that your not a machine

"At least, I was beginning to wonder if you were ever going to show up old man."

I think it's at last?

I love Rika's character at the moment by the way, you've done her justice.

YES! I was hoping you'd update soon! I just can't get over how amazing this fic is. The way all of the characters interact make it so realistic! Right now I don't know what to think of Daniel, though. He's trying to justify murder, and I think I kind of stand where Takato does. But that's just one of the many details that make me wanna keep reading this to see where everything all ends up!

KH

Enjoyable again, all seeming normal, no over poweredness and the discovery of powers is done well. Still wish I could find just one mistake :P

Very, very interesting, liking the humour, the gradually realisation of powers is done well and still no mistakes :D

Absolutely amazing first chapter, I couldn't find anything to fault if I grabbed a magnifying glass, my only fault is that I didn't find this sooner. I'll keep reading

Damn Apex for awhile there I thought you died you hadn't updated in so long! Nice chap! Looks like Daniel is setting Takato up for something at least that's what it feels like to me. Also looks like Rika is getting curious... I just hope it doesn't kill her. Great job and I hope to see this fic updated more often now that you are done with exams. Congrats on being done with exams BTW. Well till your next update,

-Bubbajack out!

glad to see your back.

I really liked how you've conveyed Takato's conflict of wanting to improve the city but not the way Daniel wants to.

Looking forward to see What Takato will do since he no longer wants to be like or work with daniel, alos wonder how Henry and Rika continue to develop in terms of how they percieve Chaos and what there reactions are if the ever find out Takato is Chaos.