Reviews for Who Knew
babymorris chapter 16 . 8/29/2018
The way Tyler answered, "What's wrong with Love." was so simple and innocent but held a strong and meaningful message. You nailed that line very well. I also like how you ended the story with a 'It's a name of the girl.." only this time expresses happiness and content.
Guest chapter 16 . 3/23/2017
Das some good shit.
Doubleminor20 chapter 16 . 12/12/2016
God damn, this was great. Loved how it sort of felt more real, how they would react to each other on a daily basis and how it took time and circumstances to bring them back together. Good story, will be looking forward to more from you!
Guest chapter 11 . 8/18/2015
How can you kill her if she is dead? What the fuck? Lol
Maniihilfiger chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Littttttt
xposeidonxcoolx chapter 16 . 5/30/2015
omg i love this your my favourite jori writer ever
KatieBlack129 chapter 16 . 9/24/2014
;))))) I loved this story so much! One of the best I've ever read :)
KatieBlack129 chapter 5 . 9/24/2014
Lovely chapter, they seem to be getting along just fine
KatieBlack129 chapter 3 . 9/24/2014
Wait, so they were together, but Tori's oarents and Trina never knew about it, only the friendship? I'm confused. Anyways great chapter
KatieBlack129 chapter 2 . 9/24/2014
This is actually very clever. If I didn't know any better, I'd think this was what was going on on the first episode. Great chapter!
FaithTheShipper chapter 16 . 6/9/2014
this was soooooooo good, it gave me feelings i never thought i could get from a story good job!
haylE15 chapter 16 . 4/22/2014
Perfect end :D
I thought she was going to ask her to marry and felt a little disappointed but now after reading the whole epilogue, not anymore :)
Thanks for sharing with us this beautiful story!
A few things i forgot to say: i liked that Trina was still Trina (i was chocked at the caring part but liked it). I liked the way you make Jade's father look like (he wasn't as uncaring as i imagine him in the show). It was interesting to let Jade have a brother (it makes her look different as a big sister). And finally, even if i liked the cute Cat, it was nice to read about a smarter one :3
haylE15 chapter 15 . 4/22/2014
Sweet! :3
Poor Tyler...not for the flu thing but for all that happened. He's still five and i want him to keep his innocent side a little longer...
I'd love to know people like Trish and Janice, to know how it's like to be together through a lifetime (for two women) :)
haylE15 chapter 14 . 4/22/2014
Wow i'm just staring blankly at my computer now...
People like her are just...i don't know, i have no word. I just can't understand.
To think this was happening all along...
And i forgot that in the beggining, Tori left Jade. So i can understand why she had a hard time trusting her again. (yeah sometimes i'm so caught up in a story that i forget things xD)
haylE15 chapter 13 . 4/22/2014
The dream is simple but beautiful.
I always like femslash version of fairy tales, and this one is no exception x)
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