Reviews for Rarity's Diary
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
米軍の顔怖すぎだろwwww
obligation01 chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
baka ha shine
Bronie Wubz chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Well I for one loved this story - of course I love all Rarity storys! I am also making a story myself based upon each episode , the next one is tomarrow upon the same episode!
I think you should keep making storys like this and dont forget to take a peek at mine too! I will read each chapter!
warprince2000 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Awesome Chapter! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz)
Rufus T. Serenity chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Before I give my review, there's something you need to know about me to fully understand my views on this story. I had discovered My Little Pony like two or three months ago but I was never able to get into the fanfictions for some reason that I can't explain. I truly love the show but I could never get into the few fanfictions that I tried to read.

However...yours is the first one that I was able to read all the way through and LOVE! THIS STORY IS AWESOME! :)

As others have commented, you've nailed Rarity to a degree that is shocking. Everything from the choice of words, to the thoughts displayed, to the overall manner of conveying the thoughts fits Rarity like a perfectly tailored glove!

Also, I largely don't have any "ships" when it comes to this show but one of the few is Rarity and Spike. There's something about that pair that just clicks with me and you've recaptured that perfectly here in your story.

Anyway, so to sum up I greatly enjoyed your story and may read some of your others at another time. :)
ShadowofaDemon88 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Would it at all seem strange for me to think this is exactly what the writers were thinking? I mean season 3 had an obvious lack of Rarity and an even greater lack of any Sparity moments. Maybe she is sorting out her thoughts...this was very well done and executed. I'm glad I found it, nice job!
Sumponeigh Knot Yew chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
congrats...i could hear Rarity speaking these words
MikariStar chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
you write Rarity's pov very well.
TheCloudtop chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I really like the way that you portrayed Rarity's thoughts in this fan fic. Great work.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
I must say, I enjoyed how Rarity constantly kept talking to "Dear Diary". It really does sound like something she'd write.
Raritylover chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO MORE DIARY OF RARITY OR SPIKE! PLEASE MAKE A SHIP! PLEASE!
zabchan chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
you have rarity's voice down pat, and i like the depth of feeling you brought to the character. I'd be interested in reading more rarity diary entries.
Swashbucklist chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
It looks like you do the same thing as me when I write Toonami fanfiction: pay close attention to the canon details. This was a pretty sweet diary entry, and it got surprisingly touching toward the end the only thing that kinda got annoying was Rarity's usage of her pet name for Spike. Every. Single. Time.
Obi-wan Kepony chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Great job...cant wait to see more fics frpm you
ElijahBleu chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
yes please contuine with the dairy

i would like to see how this turns out
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