ooo. read the first chapter, and I'm intrigued...

The Ponds had always come across to me a Tory kinda people, but I am probably being terribly stereotypical. I didn't think it was a very Rory-ish thing to say anyway.

Was it the yellow button or the green button Amy was meant to press? The Doctor told her to press the green one, but she pressed the yellow one. Or maybe I'm jumping the gun and this is a key polt point... I will read on to find out.

I like your narrative style, and the fact you've not overloaded it with description. I loved the bit at the end with River. I could just picture her telling Rory completely straightfaced that it was hopeless taking a cyberman to a concerto because they're tonedeaf.

Nice!

"The Dalek ship was being swallowed whole by the tumescent twister." -Just have to say, very poetic language.

I love the Doctor/River banter!

EEEEK! The Howling coming for them? Reading on!

Just when I think I've gotten the hang of where this fic is going, the rug is pulled out from under my feet! I love it!

Oooh! Twist!

I have to say, I'm wondering what in the world River did with a Cyberman... Does that make me a bad person?

Wooooo! River to the rescue!

I loved how the Doctor was complaining about covering his face.

*reads farther*

AHHHH! Who is it? Who kidnapped him? The Daleks? Who?

(You captured River very nicely by the way.)

Tennant Ale, very funny! Love the story so far, it's great! I love how you had the Doctor be a hologram, it definatly seems like somthing Moffat would do!

Wow! This is an incredible story. You are so good! Please, pretty please update soon! XD Happy New Year!

Tennant's Ale? Cute. :-D And I'm loving the Star Wars quip. (By any chance, have you seen season 2 episode 1 of Torchwood?)

This fic is enrapturing. I love it! What the heck happened to the Doctor? Okay, I'd review more, but I'm heading to the second chapter now. See you there!