Very very nice.

Very good. Poor Damian. He is really conflicted on how and what to do and say.

Very nice. I like the tone of this chapter.

Oh my gosh! He’s comparing handsizes just like he does when he’s older in Shattered. )
I am so happy about this.

I can’t believe I never reviewed this part!
Well I re-read it and I enjoyed it immensely. I think my favourite part was when Bruce let himself tell Dick how he really felt and let himself take in what Dick was saying about how far he’s come. Bruce has so much self-doubt at this stage in his life and he really needs to realise how awesome he is.
I love how you write these characters, you really are brilliant Jack. They’re masculine but they’re the right amount of vulnerable too, just brilliant.

Loved this chapter a lot

SO CUTE!

That is SO CUTE!

Very good, very enjoyable.
Good to see Damian taken down a peg or two, the kid is too arrogant and self-assured.
I love his punishment, too funny.
Bloody brilliant mate!

I loved Damian shot the most, supernatural cute and so in character

Awww damian and bruce were writtdn so freakin good

I think this is one of my favourite exchanges ever between Bruce and Dick. You wrote this wonderfully well. Sweet without giving me a toothache.

Dick brings out the best in Bruce.

And that story was my happy conclusion for the evening. I do so love how you write Dick and Bruce. It's a shame that you feel the need to retire from writing them...anything I could say that might persuade you otherwise?

"I like the bouncing. And the hair-stroking. And your holding me. Do NOT tell Dick and especially do not inform Drake. I would only need one more excuse in order to kill him."

And right there I was on the floor squealing.