aghhhh sad!

THIS IS SO SO SO BAD IM SO EMBARRASED WHY DID YOU WRITE THIS OH MY GOD THIS IS ALL SO STUPID WHY DID YOU NAME THEM AFTER TWO TEXAN CITIES GOODBYE I HATE THIS I HATE THIS AND CHERRY IS PERFECT WHY WERE YOU SUCH A JEALOUS 12 YEAR OLD OH GOD

this story is so bad why did you write this who gave you a computer and free reign over the internet at 12 i'm ashamed to read this oh my god i wish i could delete this you're an embarrassment. giving them both names of texan cities was not cute this is so dumb and why did you hate cherry shes so perfect i hate this

I agree with you on the Cherry front. The fist time I read the books, I thought she was okay because she didn't let Dally walk all over her. However, later she just acted like a snob. And not even outright Snobby, she acted like she wasn't awful. That's like one of my biggest pet peves (not sure how to spell that). I really didn't like how she acted like she was in the right when she SHOULD HAVE VISITED JOHNNY IN THE HOSPITAL! Grrrr. I'm glad Pony got mad at her. She deserved it. So yeah, you could say I dislike Cherry the most. Aside from Bob. But that's a whole different rant. Sorry for complaining, I just wanted to get that off my chest. Also I'm half asleep so I tend to be slightly angrier at the world.
Anyways, I love your story. Dally is portrayed wonderfully. Can't wait to read more.
Sincerely,
Nessie2000

I'm like sobbing my eyes out right now! But great story

Excellent story!

Best. Story. Ever. I am literally sitting here with a box of tissues, crying my eyes out. I want to congratulate you on the wonderful job you did writing this. The Epilogue was extremely well written and it had me sobbing through the majority of it. You definitely have a talent for writing sad things like this, and please consider that a good thing;). Thank you so much for writing this. :)

I really like houston but the sad part of the story was you made Johnny and Dally die. I thought you were going to let them live but I still love the story.

AHHHHH the ending just makes the whole story so depressing I'm gonna go cry now

It's just so sad but good. I crying so hard right now!

This was sooo good! I love this story. I am not reading the epilogue though because I don't want to cry tonight :) I also appreciate that you didn't make Huston's reaction to Dally passing part of the plot, again, I don't wanna cry right now haha. I'll look on your page and I hope to read more stories from you :)

I cried a little
Wish you didn't kill off Dally but still loved the story

WHAT THE HELL! You had to kill Johnny and Dallas?

WHAT?! NO IT CANT BE OVER! PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER BUT DON'T KILL DALLY...PLEASE DON'T KILL DALLY!

You updated yah! Love it. Update soon please.