Please update soon! Either one is fine!

It's honestly kind of hard to tell that she's a twelve year old. Like, she acts like she's Ichigo's age and it's just kinda weird since she's not. I get that trauma causes kids to kinda grow up in an unhealthy sort of manner, but this is just not... right. Also, how the heck did she manage to teach herself to wield those zanpakutō in only a couple of months? That just doesn't sound like something a twelve year old should be able to do without a reference of some sort or a teacher. That first battle probably shouldn't have been as easy as it had been— receiving an injury or not —especially if she had never practiced on, from the sounds of it, a moving target. She's also not very cautious when it comes to revealing what she knows, which I'm pretty sure was something she was told not to do. All in all, Robin seems pretty arrogant for someone that's been put through hell. And again, I get that she's only twelve, but the mental maturity you're setting her up with isn't matching her age. I mean for example, Yuzu's pretty mature for an eleven year old, but she still acts like an eleven year old, you get me?

That's really all I have to say about this. Here's to hoping things get better as they go on.

Please continue, I feel that a sequel re-write would be cool. But honestly, all I know is that this is one of the best original character stories that I've read and I can't wait to read more !

I don't care which one you do(actually I can't decide which one), just please continue writing it! I really love your ideas. Especially the bount arc- made me feel so excited! I'm really curious about what Ka-something guy (the leader of the bount) meant when he said that Robin was the same as him.
I would have discussed more(like how adorable it is when Ichigo acts protective and other things) but it's 4 AM here and I really need to sleep. Hope to see you later.

I think you should do sequel rewrite.. or are you going to discontinued this fic? anyway! I'll be waiting!

...Please do a sequel re-write.

That was freaking hilarious

I loved this from beginning to end but a sequel would be amazing as well. Honestly, the story ended on a hopeful/foreboding note, so I think that's an amazing ending. My verdict is... Sequel. Keep up the amazing work Star. You've actually inspired me to become a writer myself. At first I thought of it as a hobby, now it's a career. Thank you for that.

Love,

S. Mudd

P.S. I miss you like crazy. Just sayin' XD

Please make a sequel!

It doesn't matter to me, just as long as you keep writing.

Well...I don't really care, but if you do the re-write, would you change anything big, like her age or her powers or something? I don't think you would, no matter how much I want the age changed..., but please tell me when the re-write/sequel is up! There's barely has been any Toshiro moments, and I personally love this story no matter how much you think it doesn't look good compared to others. I love the idea, the way its written, I love it all! So I implore you to keep writing, for its too good of a story to pass up and throw away for whatever reason. Please tell us soon! (And I'm not sure how to pm people{that and I'm to lazy to go do it, also} but could you tell me the idea Kubo 'stole'? I'd like to see where this goes, and if when she came to that world she finished the whole story, with Ichigo being Quincy/Soul Reaper/Hallow)

Please do a plain re-write. I like the story but I'm interested in seeing what you would change.

Hey it's me! i was just too lazy to log in xD haha and I think that the sequel is a great idea because I really still love to come over and re-read this story, and if you do the sequel I can come over and read this one, and the go read your sequel re-write. I'd love to see all the crazy stuff you're going to add. I also really want to know what your idea is, but i dont want the surprise to be ruined for me. So yeah, i say do the sequel re-write! :D

Aww too bad I really like your story!
Sequel Re-write for me!
And I wanted to know about your idea heheh
Will be waiting for your Sequel!

I'm not really sure what to chose really. A rewrite would be better since you haven't completed and/or satisfied(?) with the story, but since it would be discouraging to read/rewrite a story that won't be changed to much. A sequal sounds interesting considering I wouldn't even begin to think of what will be going on or when it's beginning from. However it also seems a bit hard because the first story isn't completed and you don't want to rush it... While writing out this whole thing with one freaking hand I decided to chose sequal. Even though I would like to see this story be a bit longer, I think it would be cool to have a time skip and it's your story if you wanna write a sequal i'm not stopping you.