The eyes can revive people. Why didnt he say that or he cant?

That challenge is kind of limited and pointless. One, why does Rito even have to be in the story? Honestly his character pretty much outside the first season was pointless, even as comic relief, because really it was the SITUATIONS created by Lala's antics that created the humor. Rito's overreactions were like icing lettering on a cake and honestly at many points just got downright annoying. So I don't understand why he even has to be in a crossover like this and not his female counterpart Riko, whose presence was actually more comedic. Also why does Haruna have to be paired with him? I'm starting to think people in this genre hate Haruna for whatever reasons I cannot fathom, she's like a less spineless Hinata, personally I think Haruna is what Kishimoto was TRYING to accomplish with Hinata, sweet and shy, but ended up making a stuttering mess on his part.

Also why do people who make Naruto immortal make it like he goes through his immortality single? Makes no sense. It would make more sense for an immortal Naruto to already have a harem going, I mean he's freaking immortal! Whose going to go THOUSANDS of years without sex?! Most people can't go thousands of seconds without it!

Lastly, there are plenty of ways to deal with the immortality issue beyond a 'Mate Mark'. First of all, I think it's pretty obvious Devilukeans and Charmians are at the very least VERY long lived, considering Gid and Sephie look to be the same age as their daughters, which means they at the very least, age VERY slowly, which would mean they have a long lifespan. Also, one thing never pointed out in To Love Ru is the Deviluke sister's ages are NEVER specified. Wiki's show them being a mere year apart, however flashbacks of their childhood show Lala being noticeably older than the twins. For all anyone knows, the sisters may all be over a hundred years old and just now starting to catch up to each other physically. (Physically, if two people as children are years apart, say four or five years, but have immortal lifespans, then it would take a century or so for their ages to start catching up. This concept has been shown in other animes about supernatural beings, siblings are years apart, but once they reach adulthood, usually centuries later, they are physically close in age).

There are also other methods, mysticism, technology, fuinjutsu, there are a bunch of ways in something as UNREALISTIC as the To Love Ru universe for a mortal to become immortal.

"NA-RU-TO!" came the early morning sound of Saruyama running to his friend and his friend's sexy fiancé, right before Naruto placed him in a headlock and pressed his face against the floor.
Wrestling move DDT!
At least that's how I picture it happening

should have just kept to love-Ru by itself instead of ruining it by adding other animes and shit

I thought the story was good but then you added the oc's or whatever they are

Naruto is way more intimate than Naruto-kun btw, using the "kun" as a demonstration of intimacy despite using only the name most of the time doesn't make any actual sense, he should be called Uzumaki-san and be called Naruto-kun by close friends and calling him Naruto should be only for lovers, family and really really close friends

In this section you used the the wrong sort of metal to test someone's resolve and strength is to test their mettle. To test their metal is taking their sword and stress testing it"My life has become a little hectic as of late, so it might be a while before you can test your metal against mine. But if you can wait for the weekend and you're free I'll be happy to oblige Saki-chan."

r u going to update this again?

I think you were writing a great story but I am not into harems and I think my love died out when he just up and told the nurse. I liked the story and for anyone who gets angry I knew it was a harem I just wanted to see if I liked it and I could not get behind harem ideas because I can't bring myself to care for multiple women in a series.

this naruto is too boring

didint like how they knew about rikudo sennin

dont really like memory manipulation

really hope that Naruto is the only character from his series

Naruto could have used Henge to look older

3000 years you should have at least put 5000 to 8000 years