Can I be in the story
I could be like Sora's twin

Hi there. Just a quick question- Do you have to know the storyline to be able to understand this story?

I'm surprised you only got 5 reviews (this now being the 6th) for this story. It's pretty good, both well written and interesting idea. Humorous parts as well, which is nice for many stories.

As for my complaints, well it's tough to follow where things are happening. In other words, the 2nd chapter came first, first chapter seems to be 2nd to last chronologically, and when he was talking to Xion in the beginning of this chapter I couldn't tell when it really happened besides it being after Sora joined.

A suggestion for that, you could put a date or something at the beginning of the story to even give a general idea of when events are happening. Might help you organize parts of the story better as well.

You could put them in chronological order as well, but that for some reason doesn't sound as good, I like how it is kinda set up now, how it kind of jumps around. Just need to know when it jumps around to.

Well, hope you continue the story, looking forward to the next chapter.

This story is really interesting! Keep it up! :D

This is getting interesting! Roxas seems to be quite a short tempered person, and Namine is evil as hell! Oh man! I laughed my ass off when he honked on Namine's yum-yums! I am starting to really like this story! Please continue soon! This is getting good!

Lol Sora got thunderstruck! An art club eh? Neat! Please continue soon so I can give a better review!

Hehehe Sora got pwned by suitcases :D I hope future chapters have a better outlook for Sora! Please continue soon!

Not a bad start, I like the idea of this story, please continue soon so I can give a more worthwhile review!