"Which I swear on my life will be soon really I'm in the process of writing it now"

Four years later...
Still waiting...

Seriously, this is great, really sad it seems to be discontinued!

Aw, wow-this was really good! I highly doubt that it's going to be updated (which sucks because it was awesome), but as for what's written, this is amazing!

I would be amazing if you wrote again!

I really love the way you write and all of the characters are perfect! You write so well, I'm jealous;D... I also like the fact that the chapters are long and line breaks perfectly on point. I hope you are going to continue the story, seeing it's already over a year since you've updated *wink wink* Soooo anyway, love the story, please update soon! I really hate when people start something great but don't finish it. Again, hope ya' going to update!:)

I love it! Characters were on point and everything else was just great. Update soon!

I think this chapter was good! And I love gin too! He's funny and cool! I love the stories that make gin shiro's dad! I think its so cute! And I really love this story! XD

I love this story! And ice prince Hitsugaya is one of my most favorite authors! And I agree, momo dosnt treat shiro right! Keep up the good work! XD

Really like this story so far, its fun to read and I'm interested in seeing where you go with it. Thanks for writing this, hope you update soon!

Hey theyre.
I like youre story very much, cause we think a bit alike. For example i dont like Hinamori, but like Gin ;)
i dont know why, but it seems i like all author, who arnt the ones to update on a regular basis, so i can deal with youre late updates, as long as you dont stop ;)
Im curios where youre going with youre story. Youre not one of those who try to let toshiro go over cutie, i really hate it, if other writers turn Shiro in a child. I thought of him more like an adult with growing problems. Really i think if society would take him bit more serios, then he could expand the brain of his even more.
I look forward to youre next chapter, when ever it will be. Oh, and im from german, so pls note, that some of youre readers doesnt get the inches ;)
Thanks for sharing youre Fanfic with us. Have fun writing bleach!

ummmmmm... more older stuff please

welcome back then. :3

SORRY I TOOK SO LONG TO READ THIS!

But welcome back! Bleehhhh hahaha I'm so embarrassed you dedicated this to me lololol thank you though.

I think what I really like best about this is how you've portrayed the relationships between Toushiro and everyone else. It's really nicely done and spot-on.

Here's to life and it's many difficulties

Aww, I like it so far! And Finally Ukitake is introduced! I can't wait to see what kind of conversation he has with the captains!

Really LOVE your work :) I honestly love these kinds of stories and I think you do a really good job of it!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Toshiro is my all time favorite character and I love these origin stories people write! Your story is absolutely amazing! I love your writing style and you have OCs, yet you refine them perfectly. Many people let their OCs take over their so called, "toshiro-centric" that it gets annoying. You don't do that and it makes me so happy!

I can't wait till the next chapter!