great story and hope you work on this again pretty please.

Interesting story!

hi everyone! It's me! I know, it's kinda weird for me to be reviewing my own story but this way everyone can see it. americanathogwarts, i would have leaped at your idea and done that but i sort of wanted Draco and Ariana to get together and I haven't gotten anyone saying otherwise. Also, is Ariana did do that, I'm not sure how she would leave the manor due to all the charms surrounding it. Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to put down your idea but I tend to over thing things and it would really be impossible for Ariana to escape alive. But I started to build on that idea…what if Ariana convinced Draco to help her? Good, bad? do tell:) also, thanks to everyone who reads and/or reviews!I hope to update soon!

*~*princessjasmine *~*

How about Ariana uses her mysterious magic to break out and knock Draco unconscious?

this is good and remember YOU get the final say as to where this story goes do not wane under per pressure

BLACK FAMILY SMACKDOWN! lawl haha. love this chapter! (: ~

lurrrvely :) nice imagery and cliffhanger. but fyi: don't call people out on not reviewing, they don't love it :) just a word of advice, take it or leave it :)

oooh creepy :0 what a twist!

this chapter is really good! please continue! ~ (:

i like it it's faux happy ending because of the twist.

i'm sorry that i haven't sent you anything but i can't get this M rated story out of my head and i'm trying to keep ours at least teen so... yea

short but i like it

way to keep it brief amd really interesting. but what was with the italian?

yea you updated i like what you added

yes you can fix it i don't why'd you want to but you can edit the chapter by going to the story's 'content/chapters' and editing your desired chapter

i like it. quite creative. write some more :)