Reviews for So Cold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Man, your laugh there in the end was not at all evil...it seemed... ridiculous Sorry to burst your bubble!LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! I noticed what you did with the water, from percy jackson? am I right? All I know is that is how it worked in percy jackson when he went into the river styx. |
![]() ![]() i wanna sequel |
![]() ![]() More sakura bashing please |
![]() ![]() It’s inconsistent, disgusting, and generally a disgrace of a story. |
![]() ![]() Grammar is horrible, the plots are nonsensical and the spelling is even worse. Add all these three things together and you get this abomination of a story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto is a fag |
![]() ![]() Oh man. It was good, but those inconsistencies suck. I thought they had telepathy now? Where are the foxes? How did the genjutsu work? That's like, an example of making your characters too op. You need to create those problems that can't exist with the powers you already wrote. Ot gets boring without that conflict tho. |
![]() ![]() No way did Sasuke have more chakra than Naruto... and you should know this if you know the name "Kushina". But ok. The story is good enough of a guilty pleasure to let it slide :) |
![]() ![]() this is one badass story |
![]() ![]() Couldnt care less not could care less its couldnt care less COULDNT CARE LESS GOD DAMMIT ITS SO SIMPLE JESUS CHRIST IM LOSING MY MIND HERE how the hell does could care less make sense hmm really just think about it for a few minutes could care less means that the person would be able to care less about whatever but COULDNT care less means that the person really heavily doesnt give a fuck and they couldnt care less than what they are already caring now because they are at the lowest point of caring it is impossible to care less than what they are already caring Glad i got that off my chest great story btw its my 3rd time reading it |
![]() ![]() Naruto vs neji |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um might I correct something here? Izumo and Kotetsu are Chuunin not Jounin. They are partners who often man the checkpoint at the village gate |
![]() ![]() Naruto is fighting rock Lee |
![]() ![]() I like is story Naruto cold to Sakura Haruno she is loser |