Wow! It's amazing!

I enjoyed your story. Thank you for posting it. Keep up the good work!

Wow! This was quite an enjoyable read. It's refreshing to see an Ishval-centric fic that actually focuses on what Roy and Riza are feeling and experiencing. I liked your balance of angsty stuff and more tender, romantic stuff. Your exploration of their feelings (which are obviously quite conflicted and confusing at this point in time) was wonderful. And I really liked how your sex scene was realistic for both of the characters, unlike many other fics I have read. Your prose was also very nice and added to the story rather than detracting from it. (signs of a mature writer-yay!) So bravo! Keep writing! I'm looking forward to reading more of your fics.

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OMG. SO. Good.

I'm sorry that's not much of a feedback.

I just don't know what else to say. Yes, yes yes yes. yes.

3Ryari

Beautiful Chapter! I'm exciting to read the update, but sad this might be coming to a close fairly soon.

there is a misspelling on your first line, it should be throng not thong. good chapter nonetheless

Wonderful, as always.

I'm really enjoying this story! Royai to a T. Great descriptions and lovely phrasing.

Their conversation... my feelings ;-;!

Awwwww :3 As ya promised another awesome chapter Keep up the good job girl ;D You just have to adore the way Roy talks to her TwT

a very nice but serious chapter, can't wait till the next fire.

First, sorry for reviewing so late. Then...well you did nice job as usual. I liked the way that Roy thinks about Riza; how she is dirty and tired, but in his eyes the most beautiful of all women. I can imagine how Roy was waiting for some kind of sign that they are meant to be.

Once again, I found a nice thing that I need to quote: "The world had already ended, he thought, and he had played a role in its annihilation." Very impressive, I really love your way of using words.

The lemon...well I wondered at first, if I wanted to read it, but I did and I think you did good job. I always imagined Riza would have her first time with Roy. I'm waiting for the next chapter, keep on the good work.

It was a pretty sexy scene for me xD

Looove the way you described everything! (their bodies, actions, feelings, declarations).

I can't stop smiling xD Hope you update soon :3

You did a great job in capturing them in this awkward, frightening, and yet exciting moment. I always imagined that Riza would have her first and possibly only time with Roy. I don't think she would ever risk her tattoo being seen just for her desires, so I'm glad and agree that you made her first time with Roy. This is really wonderful and definitely deserves a lot more attention. I'm excited to see where you're taking this!

Thank you for this!

Hauntingly beautiful.