Awesome story when will the next chapter be finished

I love it! :D

Pls do continue! Luv ur story there! :D

Hey, you seem to have vanished. It's been a while since you've updated your profile and even longer since you've updated this story. I really hope nothing bad happened to you; the world can be unpredictable. Please do update soon. I might work on an artwork of Adman. We'll see. This story is awesome, please keep the chapters coming.

So, I'm guessing this sorta Rukato but I'm not sure yet. Great story so far though

Hello?You here?You been here forever!

AMAZING :)

I know this is going to look like nit-picking, but attention to details is important.

"He immediately went to the nearest pay phone and dropped a quarter into the slot".

Pay phones in Tokyo take quarters? Really?

"Takato smiled remembering Rika's grandmother who had once offered to make cookies for him after just meeting him, "Hi. This is Takato. Is Rika around?" The elderly lady..."

Ruki's grandmother is *barely* into middle age. She is nowhere close to being "elderly"

"Unlike the majority of the Tamers who lived nearby the twins were far off in Hongo which required a long trip via bus or subway to arrive".

Ai and Mako live in Shinjuku. They were staying with their grandparents in Hongo after the evacuations. It was their house in Shinjuku that Impmon broke into as he began his search for the kids. He found the drawing board in their bedroom with the message they were in Hongo. This long after the end of the D-reaper threat, they would have returned.

Details like these are important to doing a good fanfic.

you really need to upload new chapters, i only started reading this about 2 days ago and finished it today but think that now you should try to upload a new chapter about once a month so that readers have something to keep reading and ever since i saw digimon for the first time i was a fan but disliked how season 3 ended and this is brilliant for continuing it, well done.

Loved it keep it up can't wait to read more may the power protect you

A very well written first chapter, you got me hooked!

John old pal, great chapter I have been rereadying your entire fic.
I think that the last part was a bit to much. Poor Shadowmon.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Peace Out.

-growls at ending, Adman, that was uncalled for. He was trying to help you, dammit! No need to be an ass about it! Do the others know about him abusing Shadowmon? I know they can't really do anything about it. But it would at least make me feel better! -mutter mutter grumble grumble- Update soon!

hate it

BAD