I love this story!

woo wooooouuuu increible jijiji no puedo creer que lo hayan hecho en el metro wuaahhh ademas solo quiero saber que sucedió despuessssss waaaa mi mente va a esplotar

Wow!Sooooooooo sexy! 3 I enjoyed reading it to the end and was rather amazed by the work you did.I will be hoping for more in the future and will definitely read any other stories you have.

Rei

*wipes away blood* wow that was great

Loved it! :)

Yes yes and fucking yes. poledancer!fai is now my personal favorite. Please write more, I'm begging you. I will read ALL of them Fai is so... so SEXYY! Urrrgh, I wanna fuck him D: No penis though... I'll use a strap on! ( Was that creepy? A bit? Yeah... I know)

Anyway, this was wonderful. Simply wonderful :D

So hotttt! That's all I can say XD! Sex in subways is totally hot! Specially when da 1 who's doing it r kuro n fai, luv it! Please make a sequel I need it

Wow. Um. That was hot. Totally hot. Never would've thought you'd write something like this. But I like it.

Hi! I know this is really selfish of me and that the story is over and all but can you please make a sequel? I would really love to know what happened after this! I do hope you consider this selfish request of mine :D

And I would also want you to know that this is my favorite fanfic about this ple :) keep it up!

T-that was... woah. *staunches nose-bleed with a heap of tissues. It was a miracle no one saw them though. If I was there... *gives a lecherous grin as she whips out a video camera and a new packet of tissues* Anyway, this was awesome! In a way, I'm glad there was no Chapter 2... I don't think I would have been able to handle it... *faints from blood-loss*

Hot damn. XD 'Nuff said.

Great story. I loved the idea, train sex is rare these days. Anyway, in the way of mistakes, the only thing I found that resembled one is "He pushed the digits pass the lips that parted. Or parted lips". I'm not sure if that's intentional, or your notes that you forgot to erase, but it's there. Still, I loved this story, please keep up the good work.

Damn... *staring* that was hot O_O"

*clears her throat* Well, I noticed a couple mistakes in my distracted state... I will tell after I reread it _"