Amazing. One of the best precure fanfics I've ever read. I'd absolutely LOVE to see it as a season of precure. I'd also like to see a prequel with Dawn and Dusk.

Awww! What a cute and funny episode! Cake Misadventures. I like the titles you give your chapters.

Also a little review for chapter 15 since I forgot to bring up some things. I liked the conversations between Binbeat and Hoshi. Those were both funny and important to the plot at the same time. But I do have one little nitpick though: Asa and Hoshi were six when Hoshi confronted those karate people in the flashback, right? I don't think six-year-olds are capable of understanding the concept of using people for their own gain or understanding what true friends are. It'd be a bit more believable if they were a bit older, like ten or eleven. I took a psychology class last semester so I know. But that's about it. I'm really liking this story regardless. I kinda notice that every chapter is either important to the plot or moves it forward in some way, and you're doing a good job of it. Reminds me of Doki Doki Precure!

No maid cafes and no haunted houses. Kudos to you for lampshading those overused cultural festival cliches. Yay. I was hoping somebody would do that! Also..."Mid season plot twist?" I LOLed so hard. I want to read more of this! Awesome chapter.

Wow! You're off to a really good start here! It's interesting that one girl's a Toku hero fangirl and the other likes cars and is a bit of an ice queen (like her nickname!), very different from the sporty girl/studious girl duo most Precure anime went with. But why is Asa's Cure form called Cure Sunday? I thought Cure Day would be a bit more fitting, but it's your story so I shouldn't complain. Still really good! I can't wait to read more of this when I have time!

i love your story! i think you should make either a preqel story about cure dawn and cure dust or you should write an all star movie with cure sunday and cure night! i love what you did with the story and the plot twists! i know it was a beautifully writen story when i was slapped in the face with feels! keep up the great work! XD

23 more awesome chapters to go!

Danzen! The two of them are the best Cures!

Another wonderful flawless chapter! Why doesn't this have more reviews!?

So cool! Love the characters everything! Absolutely flawless!

Now I want a prequel story about dawn and dusk...

I just wanted to say I loved your story. I not only related to the Pretty Cures but the normal characters and the villains too. Thanks for the great read

Cool

Cool and Great

Why don't u finish the story? This is very good!

I read your fic and I think it's great, you redid the whole precure thing, there are lots of twists in the chapters, the chars are interesting :) ( my fav is Mireyes :D ) and mostly you created something unique :3 congrats, I hope you'll write it to the end :)))))