Excellent story. I’ve put a “Follow” on the sequel as I see that it’s been almost five years since the last chapter. I hope you continue the story someday. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

continue...update please

I have just found this excellent story and spent all day reading it. I hope you do find your muse. This is AWESOME. T-Rex :)

I know you've already written the story, but I am so moved by what I've read that I just had to say something. I had been reading fanfiction for quite a while. I've read fanfiction from many different television series. I wanted to tell you that this is by far the best story I have read so far.

You obviously have a great deal of talent as a writer. I can tell that this isn't the first story you've ever written. You have a great deal of knowledge about the subject, and I can tell you take pride in your writing. So many people post stories without checking for the details. Their spelling and grammar usually leaves a lot to be desired.I know I'm going to sound just like a teacher by saying this, and I have been, but it's so good to find someone who actually takes pride in proper spelling and grammar. You even know how to use adverbs properly, which believe it or not is one of the most common mistakes people make.

I could tell from the very beginning that you were a very accomplished writer. Your writing style, including your proficient use of descriptive words, makes that very apparent.

I u to know how much I am enjoy reading your story. Joy

This was amazing I loved it!

I love these quotes! I think that the quotes and its contents were well placed in the story. I look forward to reading more of your work!

Ahhhhh y would y do that, I was going to prase u but I shall not untill I read the sequel -_- that being said im going to completely conterdict myself by saying that regardless of the ending this was very well written and im a tad jealous cuz ive never finished a story fanfic or original:(

I love this chapter purly for the arguing mixed with sex XD very well written BTW

Fantastic ending ( :

Naw only a couple chapters left now

Poor JJ, but a great chapter

Good chapter. And BTW last time I was using swype text, and instead of saying really it said raffle

Oohh I am looking forward to the next chapter

Haha I love how Morgan found out

I really liked this chapter. Very funny