It's funny cause Germany like "WHY OH WHY DID AMERICA HAVE TO JOIN" and I'm like...

YOUR ACTIONS MADE THEM JOIN

Wow. This is a great depiction of the Treaty of Versailles. I like also that the countries are depicted as human beings of sorts and their sentiments on the events after WW1 were described in such detail. Good work. If there is more like this, I'll keep an eye out for them.

I feel so awesome right now XD we learned all about this is school, too bad we can't just hetalia!

This was great, and it truly cast a light on the revenge sceme of it all.

America is smart. I love stories like that! :)

I love how America and Germany interact and after hearing how America tried to help Germany I felt a burst of extra pride for being part of this country. XD

You did pretty good with this! :D I kinda wish that you'd gone on to mention that Germany had surrendered based upon Wilson's Fourteen Points, which is also part of the reason why the Germans were so outraged with the end of World War I. The difference between the Fourteen Points and what they actually got was way too much.

Aw! Alfie! Luddy! My precious babies, I'll hug you~!

I really like this! Good job!

I'm impressed. This is some nice writing.

Frankly, I've always wondered about the Fourteen points. Historians generally seem to agree that it would have been a very good idea. It was incredibly optimistic in some ways, but it would have saved a lot of strife.

And I wondered how it affected America to have it rejected and twisted.

I thought this story was really great! I've always loved reading about an America that was smart and mature. I like the facts that you included. They gave the story more, credibility, I guess. Made it more believable. There's just one thing about America joining the war.

America joined because of the Zimmerman note(Note from Germany to Mexico asking them to attack America) And Germany's unrestricted submarine warfare which caused the deaths of over 100 Americans.

It's a great story either way though! I suppose I'm just a bit of a history buff and it bugged me.

Great Fic :)

i liked it. i always felt bad for germany ;-; they didnt really start the war an ally of theirs did *huffs* *huggls germany* im sooooo sorry they did that to you

I learned a little more about history today. Thank you for this great addition to the archives, it's truly wonderful. You know, it's this sort of stuff that makes me think that Hetalia has one of the best fanbases in the world. Well-written, educational... Yes, definitely amazing.

Very nicely done.

Nicely written. It's great to see a slightly different side of America!