Its an interesting concept merging these two cannons together. You're right that starting a relationship with these two is a rather thorny endeavor given the age difference and the likely reaction from the girls. Not to mention jade coming out even for a bad dream. I think the police's reaction is a little lopsided. The girls did the bulk of the damage and yet get off Scott free while jade is getting investigated and threatened with capture. May be good to add that there is a group specifically interested in her as a reason why the interest is disproportionate. Of course, kitsune seeing her again is going to have someone watching the premises if there is such a group as they know she only frequents that area.
As an aside, it will be humorous to watch kitsune sneaking both her soiled cloths and bed sheets from her little accident.
Nice piece of work,

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Hi, I was just wondering if it’s ever going to addressed that (As far as she knows) Mitsune left an injured, unaware, possibly sleeping Shinobu alone in the house to run away and save herself a when a giant, green woman who could throw trees, and has (again as far as she knows) a vendetta against all the Hinata girls had told her she was on her way there.

Like I know we know that Shinobu is safe in every sense of the word, but with the information Mitsune has at that point, she essentially left Shinobu to die in order to save herself and doesn’t even apologize for it when she sees an injured Shinobu being taken out of the inn.

I like this story but honestly it feels like you are victim blaming keitaro, while he does carry some responsibility he is the abused victim in all this

So Keitaro is finally growing a spine, eh? Can't wait to see how this plays out

Will there be other Gamma Mutations down the line, or will it just be Shinobu?

Clearly a good chapter

Pretty cool story so far. You're doing a great job with all the characters, and having both Haruka and Keitaro handling it in a reasonable, smart way.

Keep the good writing.

Love this story its about time that those bitches got there comeuppance i am wondering though the way jade is moving with keitaro will you be changing the rating to an m and start doing lemons. Any hoo carnt wait for the next chapter to come out and i look forward to the bitches getting battered. Keep it up

Had to reread it all over again but this chapter was worth it.

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You know what I like ? Karma. And what leads to it.

I like the direction you are going with this story, and how you are addressing many of the problems that could and would arise from the situation. Your solution from Kei to Jade was also a brilliant one - yet one that could so easily backfire on EVERYONE. We all know how bad things could have gone for them in the canon chapter where they went on their little 'date', and how bad two of the residents almost took it.

As for her age, the age of consent, and Jade, truthfully, the way I see things, Jade only allows her to express her wants, desires, and inmost thoughts without regard to morals, propriety, or social stigmas. It is still Shinobu, but without her shyness or filters. It is basically like handing over 5he keys to a child, and telling them to go have fun. Only, in this instance, said car is a full grown woman's body with all the confidence and push that you could want, as well as heightened libido that comes with it. A dangerous situation if not taught control.

As for the abuse in canon, I agree, it was a major sticking point. The author tried to play it off as humorous, but the fact is, it was physical abuse. It happens in real life, and destroys lives. Heh, would everyone find it as humorous if it was a gender switched situation, with a bunch of hormonal, emotionally driven and poor impulse control boys constantly beat on the lone girl in the dorm? The truth 8s, the Manga would have been cancelled before it got out of the gates. Although, by the last chapter, Motoko chasing Kei was more out of good natured fun, rather than with any malicious intent.

In canon, Keitaro does help the girls become better people... Somewhat. He still flies off, which is tiring to see indeed.

Shinobu as the She-Hulk is awesome. The payback is cathartic. It's pretty easy to hate the other girls though, but then again canon makes it easy.

Why do I feel Kanako will backstab Shinobu?

I empathize with Haruka right now, haha. Adult, tired and dealing with kids and business... overworked lmao. She needs a vacation. Please give her a vacation and not disturb it.

How Keitaro is dealing with the knowledge is great, from what Kitsune said and what Jade/Shinobu said. I think telling Jade to make Shinobu ask him out is a great way to incentivise Shinobu and stall for time.

I don't mind age gap relationships, but my jam is secret relationships. This looks to be almost-doing that.

What frustrates me the most is Shinobu having a slooooooow character development, but that's the point. Can't wait for her to tell off the others as Shinobu.

Thanks for writing!