This has been such a fantastic story so far! I just love anything with a strong friendship between the Firsts and Cloud, especially when its as well-written as this. I've really enjoyed many elements of the plot that I often find in time-travel fics, yet finding them in this manner instead. If I'm understanding correctly, you're going to post a new version of this story on December 28? Will you only be posting the first chapter, or more? I hope it will be more! You've definitely left the story on a nice cliff hanger!

Excellent, well written story. I hope you will ignore flamers, trolls and well meaning idiots and will continue this story. I'm also interested in reading the rewrite.

Honestly, I have read this story over ten times, no matter how much I read it, I still fell in love with it, I enjoy your story. There will always be critics but there will also be fans and I am so glad that you regain confidence in your ability to write again even to the point of rewriting it, but I can say that this story as amazing, it was well-paced and it gives little clues to what things might be. I cannot wait for the day that To Be Human returns so good luck and retain your confidence!-

never ever doubt your skills again. there is always someone who wont like the way you write. but at the same time as long as there is people who like it you can say you are a good writer. maybe not perfect but no one is perfect.
i love this fic. i would mention all the things i like about it but i really cant find anything i dont like about it so ill stick with that
this is one of my all fav stories on this site and i have over 1200 fav stories saved on my account.
I love this story and next time someone say bad things about your stories, say fuck them cause if they only see negative things in the story its cause they dont like it overall. the best critique youll ever get is from people that point out both things they like and things they dislike in the story and even say how you might be able to change what they dislike to make it better
if they just say that you are a bad writer but dont say why then they are flamers that just like to make others unhappy
well uhh sry about the rant kinda my opinion if you agree then you agree if you dont then you dont i really just wanted to say that i really like this story and im looking forward to the rewrite .
and be confident cause to me and everyone els that likes this story you have proven that you are really good at this, never doubt that :)

I honestly don't understand how bad the critics were to make you stop writing and I know that listening to them can help one improve an all. Yet reading back again on the story so fair I can't really see anything wrong with it. The pace was fine the way it was going, it didn't feel rushed and to be honest it really got me to enjoy Zack and Angeal fics, whether as a couple or a parental type. I might never understand what was so bad about the story that the critics didn't like it.

Still, I'm glad that you figured thingss out and to be honest I have to thank you. It was also thanks to you that I got my hands wet with Rp-ing, I wont say I'm good at the characters that I try to portray but I do have to thank you for showing that there are more ways to enjoy the fandom than just reading fanfics or even better, writting your own. From the little that I interacted with you had the character down pat and it gave me joy to try something new. And now its been almost two years and I've had my share of characters that I've tried and slightly failed.

Looking at your snippet I can tell that your writting style has improved its more descriptive and that allows the audience to dive deep into your story. I honestly can't wait to start reading this fic again. It made me sad when this wasn't continued and I still look back at it now and again along with another story, snow day. You and other writers can show us that we can continue writting what we love for the save of that passion. And you have inspired me just a little. Maybe I will gain the courage to write a fanfic once again after a few years of not doing so.

Now I'm just rambling aren't I? Well I can't wait till the end of this month, it cannot come soon enough.

-7sodeno shirayuki7

PS: Maybe you might not remember but I was Zest Grangeitz in the past.

You shouldn't listen to critics. I loved it! I hope you don't make too many changes.

Hmmm interesting. please keep us updated when you start it! :-D

Awwwww! Cloud has two guard animals! That is the cutest thing ever! XD

...would it be wrong of me to hope that Bahamut and Dark Nation just take everyone out on their own While Seph and the others watch? Because that would be hilarious.

Please please update again I love this story and need to know what happens!

I must weep, for this has been unfinished- a piece of meat of delectable taste and well written literature- WHY.

Kidding my dramatic tendencies, would you kindly return? Or maybe it's too late...

All the same, this is a much enjoyed, much loved work- if it was ever continues, hallelujah.

If not- goddess that is just really sad to let a well written fic die out.

Lovely and entertaining.

I usually just review the last chapter nowadays, but the idea of this chapter implied so much Motherly!Sephiroth, i just gotta give you much hugs and kudos. Oh. My. God. My middle still hurts from the idea and laughing out loud.

Aside from that, the premise of this fic is so impressive I just gotta read more!

PS. Why couldn't everything turn out like this. awww.. really impressive what-if fic. I'd like a heavily clingy/protective Sephiroth over the megalomaniac one but fanfiction, like this- addicting, well-written and lovely- would just gotta do. thank you for bringing this to life.

Amazing, great, fantastic, brilliant story. Please, please continue!

Fuck yeah. At last! The coup. :3

Ahhhh why have you stopped writing!(

Wow