Don't hype up Naruto

Just wanted to point out some mistakes, the Uzumaki were not a direct descendant of Hagoromo, they were distant relatives with the Senju. And yes, Hagoromo did have only 2 sons, Indra and Ashura. The Hyuga and Kaguya were born from Hamura, Hagoromo's brother.

I swear it's like someone copy and pasted this whole chapter because I read another fanfic that had he same donuts I the same definition and all the details but the fanfic came out before this one

Interesting story

Ok I know I have been updating on and off but dude really. You just had to copy my story and make small changes to it? And your grammar is terrible. A few mistakes here there is ok, no one is perfect but you did too many while copying me. Just stop and redo the damn thing using your own ideas since you didn't even ask me for permission.

I like the premise of the story but have a quick questiOn about what your typing with. If its MS word then most of your grammatical errors should be effectively highlighted for you to correct which will make the whole thing a great deal more enjoyable to the reader.
Failing that you may want to try and find a beta willing to handle things like that for you.
Anyway grammar aside its an interesting piece that deserves more reviews given the work you have put in.

you say not at this could've fooled me, its just your gramma that needs work

Dude, PLEASE review your grammar. I just couldn't get past it.

Awesome

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Your summary NEEDS WORK!

Add commas when you are listing things

Capitalize Uchiha, Rikudo, What, They, Konoha(not Konaha, its Konoha), Along, Naruto, and Their.

Put a period at the end of the sentence

(T)heir destiny has been changed thanks to that man. (T)heir family and everything have been put on the 'no Incest' to the back

Corrected Summary

Naruto, his siblings, and the Uchiha children blessed with a gift from the Rikudo. Their destiny has been changed thanks to that man. Now their family and everything precious to them have been put on the line. What will they find and how will their future be affected? They have to find the truth and protect Konoha. Maybe even finding some love along the way. naruto x ? no incest

This summary, even after correct, is still bland and was corrected by how I thought you were goingwith this summary.

I haven't even read your story yet and truthfully I don't really want to because the summary is a reflection of your writing skills. Even as I right this, I'm find myself looking at the last two sentences of Chapter 1, that happens to be above the review post, and I just cringe.

I'm not saying your a bad writer, but you will be surprise how much more competent your story would look if you take the time to edit and proofread your story before uploading.

Hey
You've done good for yourself
sorry for the wait I've been out for a while now but good job on the story
keep it up.

like i said last time id say naruto and his brother stay good and the uchiha brothers bad but id like to see naruto with akasumi as the pairing for the rest of the story

Interessting naruto is gonna kick some asses. I like it and I also like your idea with the gods :) fits well into the story :)

I loved looking forward to the next chapter