Reviews for Paul Imprinted?
NellielBug chapter 5 . 5/21
Damn I never thought I'd see the day the cocky Paul would lose his balls
NellielBug chapter 1 . 5/21
Pretty good so far
Debbie Hicks chapter 41 . 2/20
42. Chapter 42.
Bella:
then while outside ALIEN SNNAKES Prophezied the baby was evern the drained vemnom ous a seconardry bite with my son was a immortal child so hr wit best friends wit three Volturi kldnapped us/tjhey the mother is drained of as all of blood the the n experimenbbtd then Brain surgeries the erased memoris had seven hybrid kids bitten me with him aging like Captain Spock of Vulcan the had a power good ours then Aloe vera Vapor-rubbing he a fully body and face massage the lotion lathertrd withg it biut oiled scented then to late Rubbing then the Treatments then too late Unnable to remember my true name then too late Changed from the left over venom of both gokod mine tell them then had a massive headache the shielding but Glowing more far more mostly powerfully but Starfleet marine but Federation powerful nuked both good goine with they they are dead with freaks then lost from here buried then us/they the kids wiyt they with they fled and four where's your creator tell us/they the hair grew back longer the screaming for crimes of freaks Mangled then both then the both rescued were next with my screaming then you are punished as Cullens Nothingness Severed took my humanity and virginity away from me/they with him/they sliced then brought there with the kids aged to adulthood nothingness brought there goof with they experimented good blew with each both she stopped having kids good died there then too late myself so weak from blood loss vomiting blood from here Alice found me so sick do something we must save her/they then Nothingness with they both then Sliced freely both then never was there then nulled freely both vanished good they perished from here more Volturi guards in time experimented in death the corpses were crematd good thinner then too late more of them stolen from here then it really happened my heart stopped beating Alice the left over venom is speadinbg it's healing her/him/they then too late Can you remember us/they no it's as all gone erased Alice she's Anmesiac then too late Was now no longer human wit they sliced with they had a headache then shielding for real carried after death was iciest cold to the touch forever nuked freely with they vanished conversion took days Alice she's a Vampire slayer oh my god she has great-grandchildren so the kids gasp they can't mate as well infected has telepathic powers so they had supernatural abliltes gasp they can't be killed the humans noticed her fiery bright golden/black eyes is paler is three times stronger physically greater much stronger earned Werewolf's pointed ears upswept rich Sch'n T'Gai eyebrows were slanted had oiled but scented skin raged in Strom's nostrils madam I am married young Alice you were right I am not human dressed in a my Starfleet uniform of the year 2379 now I Look much healthiest better fastest but lithe graceful but elegant not clumsy Alice I Made a lot tests she is not aging at all anymore so they are linked gasp hair with bangs then nuked with they with my descendants's shattered vanished good never returned they are what Vulcans in time groan my head is killing me Rose, your mind to my mind your thoughts to my thoughts our minds One and Whole share your mind with me was a touch telepath by touch focused my telepathic powers had Gaean forest green blood by the host cured her by my psychic touch Alice she's what Vulcan had great-great-grandchildren had kids by what pon'farr a time of mating gasp she is not human too late time aged us/they looked in our twenties in time never was alive at all history had been altered Alice she can't die they are not mortals where are we on Vulcan saved from death in time was not on Earth on the planet Vulcan.
AliceCullen0629 chapter 41 . 10/8/2019
good story I liked it
Malfoy Riddle Heir chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
Wrong story
Malfoy Riddle Heir chapter 16 . 9/11/2019
If he died from the seizure how is he cured of cancer and alive
AdoreThem chapter 40 . 11/7/2018
Hey there

I love this story and I think you're a great writer. However, I do have some notes on this chapter.

How is it possible for Bella and Paul to have a 2-year-old son when she wasn't 9 months pregnant at their wedding and this epilogue is set 2 years after the wedding?

How can Leah and Cole have 3 and a half-year-olds, when Cole was away in the navy at that time the kids would have been born, and the fact the Leah and Cole hadn't seen each other in years? I mean Leah didn't have kids when she imprinted on Cole, and Cole didn't have kids beforehand either.

Unless the kids are all adopted then I don't see how that's possible.

Keep up the writing. :)
Embrycallfangirl chapter 37 . 10/14/2018
Paul
rachel625 chapter 40 . 7/23/2018
This was perfect! Although I hate that Bella got injured, I'm so glad they were able to get past it all. I was actually surprised that Cole never found out the real reason, or that he didn't flip out when he realized Bella had dated a vampire. Also (speaking of which) Cole was an interesting surprise! Another thing that I loved about this story was that even though Edward was angry and heartbroken he still just wanted what was best for Bella and made her happy. He didn't just go crazy like in some other stories, but rather was her friend.

Thanks for the great read! I truly enjoyed it!
shbburks1 chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
Wow let see what happens
AkameDragneeltwilight chapter 10 . 8/2/2016
Sam is such a Hypocrite
Kushka chapter 40 . 7/18/2016
OK Story
lilly chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
the end,
nice

THERE IS A SUPRISE AT THE END

JUST BE PATIENT

AND I WILL MAKE YOUR DAY

GOOD LUCK

DOWN

DOWN

NEARLY THERE

JUST KIDDING

WAIT A BIT

MERRY CHRISTMAS

AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR

HAPPY BIRTHDAY

ARE YOU 554 YEARS OLD YET

I BET YOU ARE GETTING FUSTRATED

I KNOW MY SPACE BUTTION IS...

AND MY FINGERS...

P.S congratulations
YOU ARE A AWESOME WRITER AND I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR STORY
WE WANT MORE STORIES
BYE
lilly chapter 21 . 8/14/2015
uhhh man she should have said no
lilly chapter 20 . 8/14/2015
no
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