PLEASE CONTINUE! THIS IS SO GOOD!1

Aww, poor Remus. That was so in-character of Rita to write. It's terrible. It shouldn't matter if he's a werewolf, but to some people, he's less than human. This is the perfect example of a hate-crime.

Good. Captures the situation well.

I love this! You need to write more!

Awww poor remus! lol that was such a great story hope u carry on the story its really good !

I still absolutely love this story. It was great how you included that they caught the guys because someone stepped in. i would like to think that someone would step in if something bad was happening, even though that's not always the reality. The part about visiting hours was very realistic, and it was incredibly clever to add in Rita as a younger reporter. Again, great job!

Rita Skeeter is a conniving little so and so! If I was there I would punch her into next century!

This really made my blood boil! Poor Remus! He is a million times better than any of those men!

Aww, poor Remus. This was a great start. I never even thought of Remus when I gave you this topic, but it worked perfectly. You used the idea very well and your grammar was good. Great job. Can't wait to read more!

Oh no! What happened to him? Please write more! I know this is shameless, but would you mind reviewing my story too? I would love to know what you think of it! Thanks,

Natalily~