Looks good.

While humanized ponies aren't My cup of tea, i overall enjoyed both stories. Althought i fail to see how the second isn't fineshed, unless you got a suprise comming for your readers

I was really looking forward to the following lines:

Discord: How can I prove that I'm mortal?
Applejack: Die.

but this will do. XD...

Nice meet the medic reference.

Haha, obligatory TF2 reference in review.

This story is still awesome. Pinkie was spearproof.

Good to see this series up and running again.

Your AU insertions of characters such as Tank are very good.

Yay we have a Frankensteins Monster!

As in, it seemed to be dead, but it's not.

I like the originality of your work and can see you are taking your time to make sure it turns out the way you want it, thanks for coming up with something that hasn't been beat to death and isn't full of shipping. by the way I love the Thomas Jefferson Quote coming from the mayor in this chapter.

You may be taking your time with this story, but that's all right. Just keep it coming.

Poor ponies. First they found Celestia was a demon, and now that their ancestor-founders were louses (lice?). That's a lot to take in.

Are you saying Discord zapped the original ponies so they were unable to sleep while in Hippaea? Or just that they'd never be able to enjoy peace there because of bad luck?

Please don't be dead Please don't be dead Please don't be dead

Good to see this story/saga is continuing. I may be a little late sometimes, but I continue to follow it.

Your version of the Equestrian origin story fits right in with the rest of your version of the pony world.

Please update again soon!

Ah, good 'ol resource wars. Classic.

Well, we know who Pundamilia's descendant/succesor is, don't we?

Why doesn't this have more reviews? This is a great sequel to an amazing fanfic.

Oh, goody...another mouth to feed...