First time writing?! This is great! I know it's a bit late, and you're probably out of the Sherlock fandom, but I just want you to know that you're appreciated.

DAT WAS BRILLIANT!

This is so good! I love it! you wrote this brilliantly and I like the inclusion of a few cases without taking away from the main plot, it was done very well. I love John's denial in this, because that is so him, even if it's very obvious, and I also really like that he doesn't consciously acknowledge the fact that he sort of accepted it, and didn't immediately place a label on it. It wasn't too rushed or drawn out either, and I was honestly feeling the nervousness and excitement of it. The mood was fantastically conveyed and the descriptions were accurate and precise without being confusing. It was a great fanfic and you should totally write more! (i also by the way, just to congratulate myself, totally guessed that he wasn't actually going out with Emma in the beginning so yeah, just me bragging.

This was a first fic? Wow! You did a great job! Sexy, well-written, and I loved the concept!

I rarely review fics, as I'm not too elegant with my wording a majority of the time. However, I simply just wanted you to know that I find this exquisite. Wonderful writing, very creative. I love it, and I will remember to come back to it when I log in later so I can favorite it.
As a side note, it could do with a good proof-reading, but I'm not one to judge. It's no biggie.
Anyway, fabulous job and I hope you keep it up! :)

Delightful. This was kind of perfect, and I like how John had no clue what was going on, despite the obvious signs. This is one of the few cases in which Sherlock's manipulations aren't something I mind at all on John's behalf. And I actually didn't mind the format- it did seem to flow better like this.

Excellent story. Very hot hope you write more

Wow, that was really wonderful! I enjoyed every bit of it.

This story was wonderful! I love the dynamic between John and Sherlock, it really coveys the tension we all see in the show. :) Perfect characterization, perfect pace, perfect story. Thanks for the amazing read!

Love it!

Fan-freakin-tastic

Great story thanks for sharing really enjoyed it xx

yesssssssssssssss! thank you, VERY good!

Honey, this is BRILLIANT. I love it, this is a great johnlock oneshot. The pacing was good, and characterization was consistent. There were a few grammatical errors in which you said Sherlock when you meant John or vice versa, however the story more than made up for it. Perhaps try reading your story out loud as you type or edit; this helps me keep tenses and subjects straight.

Excellent.

Yup! Thoroughly enjoyed it. Sherlock was a great actor in the part when he supposedly fled from the end of date kiss. Thank you for sharing.