Reviews for Double Down |
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Fanfic-Critic1805 chapter 5 . 3/27/2015 This fic has some serious potential, you should continue it. |
Rachel Garber chapter 4 . 2/23/2014 Mother's a fucking bitch, "don't attract attention to yourself" Seriously, oh you mean by being alive What a Cee U Next Tuesday. |
Rachel Garber chapter 3 . 2/23/2014 Gonna get all bitchy on the family that has been caring for him, hmmm? |
Rachel Garber chapter 2 . 2/23/2014 Well I'm not sure if I want to be the cause of Edward's jizzing his pants but okay hot chapter but so sad for baby boy, loved Jaspers mother. |
Rachel Garber chapter 1 . 2/23/2014 I love slash, although I will only read stories with this pairing this is a sweet tender story of teenage boys and their first sexual experience with each other and told in a realistic and moving way. The contrast between Jasper and his parents and Edward and his parents is interesting in a somewhat sad way. |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/27/2013 man, i really wish there was more to this. what i love about it most is how well you captured that teenage innocence, not many fic writers to it well in highschool fics, this is is one of the very few, out of all the highschool fics ive read (which is a pretty big number) that has that. i managed to giggle and blush and sigh and smile along with these boys, it was a treat! |
Wordyma chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 Sooooo sweet! And awkward and sweet and so, so sweet. You capture that teenage uncertainty so well! |
Arukewari chapter 5 . 9/16/2012 update please please please please please please! |
BlueCat69 chapter 5 . 9/6/2012 Please tell me that you plan on continuing this! Such a great story and so well written – it would be a damn shame if it got lost in the pile of WIPs never to be finished. |
meh chapter 5 . 8/31/2012 I love love love this story, it's so sweet. Please continue it! |
myinfiniteromance chapter 5 . 8/24/2012 Crap...last chapter already! I was having such a delightful time with these boys, I didn't notice. Please update soon. Looking forward to dinner with the Cullens. |
myinfiniteromance chapter 4 . 8/24/2012 Yes, likey very much! Thanks for EPOV. |
myinfiniteromance chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 Loving it! They are too adorable. |
harostorm chapter 5 . 8/3/2012 Love ths story! Hope you plan to continue it. I wait with bated breath! ;-) |
LyRiCho chapter 5 . 7/13/2012 Ah... Hmmm.. I think he made the right decision! Its better to try and get along or its just gonna be heartache!.. Oh man I love this I love the love between them! Please continue! |